This story was brilliant it was independent.

Very good.

This was great really.

That was a very good story, my main man!

This was awesome and interesting to read. I love it. :)

I always did wonder how Lilo and Jumba became a little more acquainted with one another - I can totally see this happening. _

Ah, poor Pleakly. needs more fics like these. It was well-written and completely ah-dorable! Keep up the awesome work.

It's nice to find a fluff story around Lilo and Jumba. You don't see them that often (heck, I'm guilty of that too xD). I liked a lot how you handled the conversation between those two and still had some of the Ohana in there as well, as a background. It's pretty easy to imagine the whole thing, as if it had truly happened afterwards in the movie :)

Nice job! We need more simple, sweet stories like this one around !

XD my mother and i were most amused about the mosquitos.

great story all in all

I like Fluff. Beautiful. HAVen"T read one set in the Early days in a while.

I love this! Pleakley in the background was a nice little addition, it's kept things flowing nicely even when Lilo and Jumba's conversation was in full swing. Good job!

I loved this oneshot. It was very well written, and I think you got the characterisations down to a tee. Nice work.

Aw, this was a cute story! At times Jumba's speech seemed a bit too perfect, but other than that it was great. I've always loved the sweet relationship between he and Lilo! Lol, I felt sorry for both Cobra and Pleakley, moreso Pleakley! Hm, maybe that was the reason, apart from Cobra's general forboding presence, why Pleakley was suspicious of him in Shush? All in all, very nice. This fandom is in need of more stories like this.

poor noodle of an eye ... I already guessed that he had learned the truth about mosquitoes once ... jajajajajaja ... good point.