Oh, it's unfinished! Noooooooo! So I guess this puts it in the never to be completed category...puh. Well, I really liked what I read, and if you're still out there I'd love to read the end. This chapter did indeed have some emotional strife moments, well written emotional moments. I wanted to know what he was going to say to her, and how he gets to be the winner ( I can only assume he was the one), not to mention what happens between them after he wins.
Hope all is well, and mayhaps you'll actually read this review, I know it's an older story, and it'll motivate some creative spark back into life! Ciao!

"It was nice having a friend."
"It was nice having a rival."
I see what you did there, and I liked it!
You succeeded in stirring up the emotions a bit more, and I was glad to see the development of what Ranma and Akane were thinking, especially when they come to terms with their true feelings. Well, not going to wait too long here when the conclusion is within reach! Adieu for now!

Review bomb, away!
I believe that the snippit at the beginning is understandable as a future clip, but it gets a little too long and pulls the reader away from the present. If it was shorter it would be easier to pull off, and probably write, as you wouldn't have already told the story when we finally get there. However, I knew what was happening
Okaaaayyy, now on to the story! I had to laugh that Ranma pushed her into proving herself, a very Akane thing to do, then mulls it over while talking to Tofu and comes up with her putting the blame on him. Priceless!

Ok, you got me with the "Review there, you reading, review!"
I am thoroughly enjoying this, haha! Ranma's a little harsher than I want him to be, but he's just as jump-to-all-the-wrong-conclusions as always, and it's so fun to watch the relationship train careen down the tracks with him and Akane!

If I knew this wasn't a finished work I wouldn't have read it. Already having a bad day and this unfinished story didn't help either

Oooooh, I hate it when they fight like this, because of a misunderstanding, it sucks.
But a jealous and protective Ranma gotta be my fav thing, I love that about him, he's the jealous type to me not Akane, because he gets jealous more than her and even when he doesn't have a reason and every time Akane gets jealous, she has a good reason and has every right to be, you gotta update soon, don't stop now, I love this and I can't wait to see how will they make up, and also I hope you update in Live, I love this story so much, it's one of my favs, keep up with the good work and good luck ;)

Come on Ranma... man up and Kiss the GIrl and then bitch slap all your rivals

oh please please let Ranma go on a rampage

oh dear oh dear oh dear...

RANMA don't back down... come on buddy... grow a SPINE

oh please please let Ranma go on a rampage...

I'm dying here

this is really good btw... cause it's killing me

I so badly want Ranma to go ballistic

I love Ranma's reaction.

About time we see him properly jealous and threatened

*wail* I started reading this thinking it was finished (I know, own fault for never checking). All I wanted to say it's a fabulous story - so sweet and romantic and I love all the jealousy and back-and-forth. It's a brilliant and lovely story. It would be a shame to forever remain discontinued. Please write the next chapter - please, please, please!

Oh-brilliant twist. Ranma insulting her was sure to get her sufficiently riled up to agree without thinking it through first. Nicely done.

love it - very nicely done. Love how Ranma's all jealous and Akane's completely clueless!