A tragic tale with an absolutely glorious end. I loved it. The suspense was powerful as was the romance and where you put drama there was a damn lotta drama. You're a great writer with the power of great characterization. My only critique is that there seems to be a lot of repetition explanation wise and while it didn't impede the story I still think some variation could have been added.

Needless to say, you blew me away not only with the descriptors and exciting plot, but also with your ending. It's probably the BEST ending for the characters of this fanfiction and I'm so happy I got to follow them to the end.

Love!

So, I must admit. I just got to the part where Alfred found the rusted pipes... And I just... My first thought was "magic metal pipe of pain" and after chuckling to myself I definitely cried a little bit.

I love Russia, but I also love what you've done to him, even though it hurts because I totally ship RusCan.

I just... You are so good... Even though my soul is being torn in half as I read this with the amount of feels that are ripping through it...

Sigh...

Oh the feels. This story was so well done. I know you wrote it forever ago but just thought I'd let you know.

wowee, this was a great read, finished it in one sitting. this hit my emotions really hard since you were absolutely spot on when you described matt's feeling of filth and impurity and im so glad he got a happy ending and seemed to be able to get over it : with a super lovable ending. you are the amecan queen , loved all your stories so far :3

I cried. I'm seriously leaking right now. OMG the saddest amecan I have ever read. So good though. You tugged at almost all the feels.

Beautiful. Absolutely lovely.

Spanish is not my mother language, but i know quite a lot and I think this is the correct way to write that:
"no estoy enamorado de ti" - "Im not dating you"
"no te quiero" - "I don't love you"

I LOVE THIS OH MY GOD

This was beautiful. Simply putting it, beautiful. I loved it, and you have a major talent. Keep writing!

Lol, S. Italy's a taxi driver

Noooooooooo

btw i forgot this but i requested a story a few minuets ago and my name is afrukingstalker

i lve this tory so much it is amazi gly well written i really like how well u did canada and poland this ext art is a astory request dont fell u have to write it i wont be offeneded or anything italy lives on the streets in an abandoned warehouse he sleeps in a hammock he found and spends hi days looking for foood and anything to paint or draw with germany has for some reason unknown even to himself been visying italy for several week when one day he goes to see him and finds he has been raped/assaulted germany decides to take him to his home to help hime recover. if u want to a paing for Prussia of you choice can also be living in the warhouse and probaly some mafic romano and sSpain could abey pop up and wahtever other pai d u feel like adding i think that in your writing stlye this would be amazing and since you one of my top authors i thought id ask u

Amazing. You are an amazing writer and I'd be happy to read more of your stories. This was an amazing story and you're an amazing author. Don't quit writing! This was an axing story.