let me laught on top of our her misery(?) xD or not really a misery.

Yoh, I freaking loved this story! They're so in character! That is just like how Emil will react and think! And Martha is just Naughty and Persistent! It's just so... So well put together. Please make more MarthaXEmil stories, there's not enough out there!

"Girls were confusing". Understatement much? What a truly beautiful fic. ...Though I still say Marta's a redhead.

Maybe you make lemon version

loved! :D that was so good! marta's such a tease ;)

Har har har! Perfect Emil behaviour, very well written, easy to follow and well balanced tease with humor.

Dis goes to da favot1t3s.

I honestly could not keep a straight face reading this. Awesome work.

this story is awesome, and so well written and full of detail (and a great addition to the overall lack of EmilXMarta fanfiction) :)

btw, the way you write... could you possibily do a lemon with them? (there's only one other lemon-like scene with EmilXMarta that i know of, and it's very rushed and has little detail) i know you have other projects, but i'm just asking if you could. (if you won't, i'll understand)

I love this for many reasons. It's well written, flows, and has two of my favorite characters put in a mature situation. (Yes, it is a bit weird how much I really enjoyed Emil and Marta considering there is a good amount of hate at the two.) Anyways you captured their characters well, especially Emil. I love how he was against the shared shower but his body and mouth betrayed him at times. It shows the innocence of his character but doesn't completely neglect the fact he is a teenage boy. Also I love the mixed signals Marta's sending everywhere, makes me think shes the one that won't be able to hold out until marriage.

It's great to see such a wonderfully written addition to the lack of EmilxMarta around here. And sorry if my review's a bit rambling, I tend to do that when I really like something. Too many things to say, haha.

i read the reviews before reading the fic and i'm like, geez, it can't be that good...

... but it kinda was xD

i totally loved everything about it! they were so in character, and just, yeah! lol. i'm tired, can't get good words to describe it :P

Not something I would typcially read, but it was enjoyable nevertheless. The pacing, descriptions and mood all flowed smoothly and created a vivid picture of what was happening. Heh, knowing you, that is exactly what you were going for.

It was well done.

Till next time.

Oh my god X3 poor lucky bastard Emil.

Been hoping someone would do a tasteful mature ficlet with these two for a while now, and this is perfect. Feels in character very much, thanks for writing!

Good Arceus, how long has it been since I reviwed anything, let alone wrote anything...Well, if I want to get back into the swing of fanfiction things, I need to start somewhere.

First off it's good to see that there are some EmilxMarta fics on this site, even if there's still kind of uncommon. And my oh my, is this ever a good one.

Ah ha ha, Marta really would do something like this. I'd like to think she's matured enough that she'd wait a bit longer, but then again, I never saw that Hot Springs incident coming. Emil being as close to fully human as a summon spirit can be, no doubt with horomones and all, doesn't help matters.

Anyway, I thought your story was sweet, hilarious, and sensual all at once. Both Emil and Marta were spot on in actions, words, and Emil's thoughts. I quite liked the descriptions and your writing style as well. I can find not fault either grammar, diction, or style-wise. I quite liked how you danced around certain terms that your'd see crop up everywhere in other mature-rated fics.

"Girls were confusing.

Then again, maybe that was just Marta."

Well...yeah, it's just Marta, Emil. XD

So yes, to sum things up, this fic was very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I'm very glad to have read this as one of my first fanfics in nearly a year. :)

Wow...that was amazing...o.o

You managed to make that sweet as pie yet funny as hell. That was so...great...I'm totally faving it!

this was quite the interesting story XD heh, poor Emil

when they are married, Marta will probably be the ruler of the house