This was sweet,I liked the double focus on Lloyd x Collette and Emil x Marta,

there needs to be more romantic fics of them that do this.

I love the fluff added to this scene,

it was cuter and definitely more enjoyable than the original.

OMG FREAKING AMAZING AND CUTE- ASDFGHJKL:"

D'aw. Emil and Marta spying on Collette and Lloyd and Braebrae decides to jump in. Keep writing.

Wheelie

PS: This story was awesome.

wow this is my first time readin fanfic its good

Very cute, very sweet. I really liked this a lot.

I really think that you do a fantastic job with the characters, and your stuff is really nicely written! Very nice story. :3