People thought it was yaoi because you wrote "Gaara x Naruto" instead of Gaara vs Naruto in the previous chapter

Please no. Gaara vs Naruto is amazing, but I don't think I can handle Gaara x Naruto.

Pretty good story, probably my favorite Naruto fic, what I liked more was how everything was grounded and no characters were OOC. I guess my only criticism is that the plot was rather slow for the first 20 chapters, but after the whole Sand Village event I was hooked. I would have also preferred a bit more development for Tenzo, thought he would more prominent in the story.

Either way, I was pretty bummed to see that it has been abandoned, but I am satisfied with what I read.

I really hate fanfictions that make naruto smarter but keep him submissive to the old man and hateful villagers. You show him cautious then screaming about being a hokage... Why? Him of all should want nothing to do with ppl when he sees them do horrid things to him and getof scott free but if he defends himself then then the hammer is brought down. Yet he wanta to be the leader of these assholes? Why not something more realistic of a s rank or kage ninja. The injustice and naive ignorance naruto shouldnt have kills this story for me. Maybe if his dreams werent to be at the mercy of his tormentors and had a more damage kid view it would be better.

nothing against, but lousy, naruto remains dumb

This is pretty good.. I'd love to read more of it eventually

Great story hope to see it updated one day

an okay story good see that its bit different

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Great job

You haven't had Naruto improve at all, he doesn't stand a chance in any fight.

Good promise looks like it has been updated in for five years good read at least

is this fanfic over

why did you stop?

Hey, I realise you'll probably never read this, it was been almost 4 years, after all. Just wanted to say I really enjoyed your writing, and I thought the story went in interesting directions.

Even though we usually want a strong Naruto, it was nice to see that while the Naruto here was strong for his age, but he was still pretty immature and often struggled with older, more experienced opponents. I think your Naruto is very in character with canon Naruto, with hotheadedness being one of his strong character, though it is for this very reason that I don't think he's ready for chunin yet, despite his good performance during the fights, but we'll see how it goes. Thanks for the great story!