Great work ! I loved it. Thanks so much :)

HOT! Read this story quite a few times and I still love it!

OMG! I can’t wait until jasper goes into the major mode

I so agree. Jasper and Bella can’t seem to get a break from this fucking people

I'm disappointed Alice wasn't torn to pieces along with her traitorous piece of shit mate. Other than that, I quite like the story.

really good story

I think Edward and Bella exploring each other would have been better in Bella's room since all of the Cullens would be able to hear them in Edward's room. It doesn't line up with their characters. They'd be too embarrassed.

Excelente historia, me gusta mucho como escribes.

Loved it!

I don't understand... Where r wolves

Ooooo gaslighting. You’re really making Edward unlikeable in a way that makes me root for Bella/Jasper

I love jasper and I think you capture his character nicely in a way that isn’t OOC

Edward using threats, withdrawing intimacy, and perpetuating emotional abuse really gives his dark character development an edge that makes the story that much more enthralling. Great villain-building.

This is taking a dark turn and I’m intrigued. The flow of this chapter is stellar too. Flowed very nice

This is so well written and I can’t wait to read more! Thank you so much for writing it! Please keep writing!