Don't usually like POV stories, but this one is really well done. Thank you.

When I want quality writing and need a Ziva fix, I frequently re-read this story. You do an amazing job with their characterization and how you handle the situation.
Definitely one of my favorites. Thank you!

Just re-read this for the nth time and it gets better every time! Thanks for sharing your creative gifts!

Yay! Sugar with coffee!
Another perfect chapter

wow! For a non-professional, you did an amazing job. Every single word was very true, psychologically true.

Wonderfull chapter, the one before that, too, and the one before...I was too tired to write last night- that, and my bed lamp was off, for not giving the mosquitoes a large inviting sign

wow! Tsunami, indeed! Oh, my, I just love that girl
And yes, so far your writing is very maure, with awesome insight, and very clear, and real. Psychologycally, clear

This was so heart-felt and eloquent that I read it twice. This is how the series should end.
Great work.

wow, truly an amazing story. Might even read it again now. loved the stargate references too by the way :-)
from a British fan (wales)

This is an absolutely fantastic, heartwrenching story. You've handled a difficult subject brilliantly. You've written the panic attacks really accurately (trust me, I used to get them) and passing out can happen (happened to me multiple times). You've got the difficulties, pain, fear, anxiety, concern/worry...*everything* down really really well. It's tender, heartbreaking, brutal in some respects. Characterisation is brilliant. I was blown away by it. Fantastic. It's going in my Favourite Stories list.

I really enjoyed this. Nice work with Gibbs' restrictions, Tim's sense of guilt and responsibility, Ducky's warm support, Abby's exuberance and understanding, and Tony's steadiness. I really liked how you dealt with Ziva's fears, trauma, insecurities, and needs, including her need for closure, her need for support, her need for release, her need for family...you packed a lot in very well.

i actually watched that episode today!

so so good keep writing

Beautiful story!

There are so many lines I like, but since Chapter 32 is most recent (even though I just read all 32 chapters in one sitting. :P), I fricking love this line:

"You know I went through all my career with a set of rules that worked well for everyone, and then this Mossad agent stepped into the picture and for once I find myself making exception after exception for her. She looks at me with those eyes and I find myself getting soft, even sometimes against my better judgement."

It's so sweet! Makes Gibbs turn to a softie with Ziva, haha. I love the meaning of the keys that Ziva gave Tony and Gibbs. I like how you remember to write Ziva keeping her promise to Abby. With Abby being the first person Ziva would tell. HEHE.

And that is a lovely way for Gibbs to hand over the reins for Tony. I can actually see it on the show. And for sure, it would make for a lovey series finale! :D

Thanks for writing! I don't care much for sex scenes, and your story really did not need it. The little intimate actions are good enough, with hugs, and a little hand on the shoulder. :)

Ok so I just reread this for approximately the third time, and I realized I never reviewed! How lousy am I? I feel bad:(

This is truly and amazing story! You're a wonderful author, and the plot flows beautifully:) truly a wonderful fic. Thank you so much for writing it:)

I loved ur story