This story kept my attention and it's nice to read a story that isn't positively riddled with grammatical errors like some stories I find on this site. However, I honestly think Professor Layton would be the last person to ever encourage competition between Luke and Flora. There's a lot of ways in which that could get out of hand, and considering how highly the professor values peace, I think he would be far more likely to encourage teamwork and cooperation between them instead. But as I said it did keep my attention to the end. Thank you very much for the read. :)

Adorable! I'm new to the fandom (just started playing the games this past week) and I honestly really like Flora. This story feels very natural and in-character for all three of Layton & co. Well done!

Thank you for your hard work!

Very charming! The battle of the sexes, even in its mildest forms, is classic. I like the way you've characterized Flora. The story seems a bit dialogue-heavy, but that might just be me obsessing. I enjoyed this very much.

Loved the taunt.

Aww! This is cute! Good luck with your challenge! Haha - I don't even know 100 things to write for! :D

A very cute story! The pace of it was laid back, but not slow.

And finally someone else besides me addresses the spatula and pan problem. My personal guess is that Luke must have thought that he was going to a camp trip...in a luxury train.

*SNERK* Oh, this is GOLD. You should seriously post this to the LJ comm, hon. It's wonderful! I can see the pout on Luke's face! :D