This was a cute little story but would have benefited from a Beta Reader as the unfortunate change in tenses is really annoying.

Loved it! Can you maybe make more like it? ;)

I think of this story every time I watch "The Mile High Job." Since I just watched it again yesterday, it was time for a re-read. Thanks for sharing your writing!

aw! Nice work! It never really crossed my mind where Parker was during the landing until I read this... Very well done, realistic and a little bit of sweetness!

This is really sweet, and I can totally see Parker and Elliot going for each other - they complement each other well.

You are either a medical professional yourself or you did a lot of research, because the details are excellent. One thing though - I thought (and Google agrees) that the "don't let someone with a concussion sleep" thing is bogus, and it is ok. Or was it because she had secondary symptoms like mismatched pupils?

Anyway,love the ending. It's an ok place to stop, but I wish there were more, because I'd like to know how their relationship develops.

Clearly written by an EMT of some level, which always makes me happy. I love accurate medical!fic. :)

And wonderful sweetness between my two favorites. Great job!

That was cute and I'm glad I'm not the only person that thought it was crazy for her to escape that unscathed!

My one and only complaint: Eliot said "Darlin'" way too often.

Other than that, I really enjoyed the read. I loved your medical knowledge and your use of proper medical terms, etc.

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Sg

Can I get a collective "AWWWWWWW!?" That was ridiculously adorable and sweet and awesome and there are so many feels! 3 I know what I'm reading from now on when I'm feeling down! This was really incredible and beautifully written and I'm SO hoping you have written more stories about this couple because I'm gonna be really sad when I check your page in a second if you don't. Thanks for sharing this!
Meg

This is a very cute little fic that, as a complete Parker/Eliot shipper, I totally loved. I hope you don't mind two very minor criticisms though (and neither take away from the fact that like l said, I really did enjoy it). One, you need to watch your tenses as you jumped a few times to the present which can be a little off-putting and two, I think (my opinion only) you used darlin too often. Don't get me wrong, I love to hear Eliot's gruff voice saying it as much as the next girl but just take care not to over do it. See? Like I said, just minor niggles. So, thank you for sharing.

Have read this twice now, and I fall in love with it each time :) Thank you for writing something so beautiful!

You're doing it right! Sweet!

Sweetest story out there).

Awhhh

cute:) I love love Pretty as a Picture :):):)

Very cute fic.