So freakin fantastic! Please keep writing these! :))

Wow, I love your style.

It's so plain, yet detailed. You don't make stuff too fluffy, too 'pink glasses' like. It's manly, but still somehow sweet.

Thanks.

This was fantastic! I didn't want it to end. My favorite bit was, "Donny growled in a feral way that prompted an outburst of goofy boyish laughter from Utivich, and a string of German threats from a half dozing Wicki, wrapped up with Omar on the other side of the clearing." I laughed out loud just because the image in my head was funny. Nicely done!

Great story very well written! I love it.

I liked it very much; I think Donny's reluctance makes all the difference about the things he feels and the things he does with Utivich.

Yeah, they're fuck'in bastards, but I like them together.

I originally read this last night, but was too tired to review immediately. (forgive moi? :3) But oui, this is an excellent piece, and I love Donny's reluctance about Utivich; I know I'd be a bit leery myself of Ryan the Temp with a knife. Excellent work, and I look forward to reading more from you!

This is just awesome. Donny/Utivich pairing, I was a little iffy at first but you've made me a believer. The choppiness works well for this story, although I didn't really think it was all that choppy, and the ending. I loved the ending.

"They didn’t speak as they both knew there was no point. It was done now, that was that. Soon Utivich was snoring lightly, his legs completely still."

That sentence in particular had me laughing out loud. I know it wasn't meant to be funny, it just struck me as such.

Thank you for this story. It made my night.