Short but sweet :) Thanks for writing it! even though it's hsorter, but it definetly is a good piece of writing

Really sweet and hart warming :) Great job

yeah, they definitely deserve more than what they got.

that was very very nice.

I hope you'd write more?

and welcome to the fandom on . Colal is my KHR OTP too DDD

and apparently, even Amano sensei thought the two deserved more, since they're the only official canon pair who got to be with each other (albeit after a pretty painful separation), and hopefully managed to get bit extra time to spend with each other in life.

there's another story I've just read in which lal says good luck for the first and last time just when Colonello leaves to protect Viper, and so reading yours as a contrast here makes me think of a lot of things.

here's the link to the said fic:

s/5743133/1/Empty_Casings

I loved this TAT I really heart this pairing, they're extremely cute, but I think their story is too sad

This is really touching and the philospphy and logic, the way Lal thinks, is not only beautifully in character but very original. Lal isn't the one to believe in jinxing, from keeping her mouth shut about her good luck, but even still, she feels like she is regretting it. The simple dialogue went well for a simple quick flashback. I really liked this drabble ;]

Oh..god *sulks* I adore ColoxLal, and I love this. Angst is just ohsoawesome, but I agree with you, they deserved more than they got *devastation*

It's interesting to see a rarely explored area of KHR, the character Lal Mirch. I believe a lot of mysteries lie underneath the tough cookie, and you brought some light to that.

Oh hay thar, Sora 8D I'm really liking this, especially because its actually your first time writing KHR. You got Lal's personality down pat, I think. About how she's raging that she can't fight during choice, and her rational side as well. What I loved most about this fic was that it comprised mainly of her emotions - and that alone, was able to tell a good, interesting story. I really like this pairing and I can't really find anything to nitpick at, so keep up the good work!

So sad ;_; but really well done! I enjoyed reading it :)

Colonello and lal did deserve so much more...

There's not nearly enough coloxlal fics here. I'm really glad you did this, it's very good. :)

Please do more stories for for them!

written very nicely!

it's sad, but of course a fic like this has to be.

good job!

Its good :) but sad :)