HOLY FUCKING SHIT, IT'S BEAUTIFUL.

Amazing.

Wow. Wonderful story!

Holy fuck, that was incredible. I can't even-

Goddammit. That was beautiful. I think you broke me. I can't think properly anymore.

This is beautiful beyond words. Your writing style is clean and so easy to read, i couldnt stop.

This plot is truly amazing, anf i can't help but think you truly are amazing for coming up with it.

Good job with this, keep up your amazing style.

You're right, this did make me feel like crap. But I guess that's good, since it's supposed to do that.

Okay question. Once Matthew showed them the items what happened to the others?

My God. This was brilliant. The repitition with 'Matthew is a quiet boy' was a great addition and I love the description. Thank you so much.

-curledruler

So very interesting. I love how this is written. Very nice.

omg! as soon as i got to 'village' i knew i had to read all of it, and then some. bless you :D

Not really much I can say about this one

But ffff

poor matthewww :(

excellently written though! : D

Ooh this is so unbearably, heart-wrenchingly beautiful :'D I fell in love with WtHF and this is just AMAZING! If this honestly did happen in the series then I would accept it, even though I love Al, Francis, Mattie and Art to...well...DEATH!

Lovely, amazing, stunning, beautifully written job :'D

Oh and before I forget, your use of repetition made me chuckle bitterly every time. Absolutely brilliant.

aw this is so beautiful and sad! the family-ness is so touching 3

just one question: what's the importance of the word "village"? i know its a geographical location... and all the characters are geographical locations... but there's another meaning besides that right?

TT This is amazing.

I'm so happy you put this on Fanfiction.

This was so beautiful. I have this achy feeling in my chest because it was just so goddamn lovely. Thank you so much for writing this.