I really liked this. Funny and serious at the same time. And I do believe Ziva would've felt adrift after being rescued, the way you described it.

Loved the candidness of their talk. Loved how she let herself be exposed to Tony.

ADORABLE!

This is wonderfully sweet, though deeply heartwrenching at the same time. It's so adorable and tender and you've got them down perfectly. Love the amusing bit at the end!

was really good!and cute!hahaha probie fell off the bed...he would.

that was good, i liked it, well done :D

That last line just cracked me up! I swear I jumped! Got caught up in the lovely scene and then Gibbs snuck up...;p

You are a truly gifted writer and you manage to stay true to the characters. (something of a rarity)

Thank You.

This is beautiful :D

I loved this little oneshot; it seemed very in-character, which is always a plus with me.

Just one thing. How can the be watching the end of a sunset like it says towards the end of the story at 4:30 in the morning. Unless they are on the other side of the world, and if they are that ought to at least be mentioned, sunset should have been before they went to sleep. Is it the start of sunrise? I don't understand.

Very good story but if they were asleep they probably would be watching the sunrise not sunset.

for someone who thinks she has a hard time with the characters, I think you did a remarkable job of getting into their heads. Ziva's confession sounds so true and fits so well I actually feel as if I know Ziva better now. So, once again, I will plead with you to continue writing more, for my selfish pleasure.

that was such a sweet story...thank you so much for sharing...by the way, I loved the ending...that was such a Tony thing :))

That was very very good! Love it!