Is this a one shot becasue it should not be. Please make more chapters.

I really like it :) Keep writing I want to see how this plans out :) I agree it does sound like its going to be a cracker. waiting for more.

DayDream xox

this is super good! can't wait for the next chapter!

Gasp! OMG, great opening chapter! You're very good at setting a tense mood and creating cliff hangers. Your descriptions just keep getting better too. You got Bec in character too Basically, great start, and I really want to know who this ghostly Mr X is ;) xx

This is interesting... Being trapped in a rock for so long, then just becoming a teenage girl would be interesting to say the least. Good job with the details of the area, but a couple typoes. I don't anything about the story, but so far I'm not overly confused.