Loving the story reading so fast I don't review much it's like adrenaline to see what happens hope he's asking Edward permission to get engaged

I like this side of Renesmee

Aahhh! This is going to ruin things!

Is this your story or is it cullencrazy's?

You need structure in your story, i'm not saying plot wise but how it is laid out in the page. So far so good, but please consider revising the layout. It will make it easier to read.
Best wishes,
M

for heavens sake nessi is a hybrid half vampire no push over

I WONDER WHAT EDWARD FEES ABOUT THIS MAKE OUT SESSION

Could you space out the paragraphs? It's kinda hard to read

your book is amazing! you are so talanted please carry on writing because like most of these books i get bored but yours i couldnt stop reading i think its really amazing, and you are truly talanted, please carry on writing books like this, because im in love with your story telling.

Thankyou for sharing this story because you thouroughly entertained me! i think its amazing!

PLEASE write more!

thankyou

shannon xoxoxoxox

love the whole thing

i really dont like you at all, but you have good writing.

This story is definitely one of my favorite Jacob/Nessie ones! Thank you so much for writing it ) There's just one thing I'm a little bit confused about: since Nessie is a half-vampire, shouldn't she be much stronger and faster than Jason? And shouldn't she be able to beat the crap out of him? (which I want to do, too, trust me D)

LissyGirl

Great job! I really enjoyed this story! There were ALOT of surprises that I didn't expect and its total different from how I've pictured their story. Keep up the good work. I'm enjoying what you've done with the sequel also and can't wait for new chapters.

this was like the awsomest story you need to right more omg that was a great srory!

I LOVE Kacey! She is amazing and funny!