Good story. Well done, but feel bad about Elizabeth. Mozzie is annoying the way he keeps digging into Neal's private life. Sorry. I doubt you can deliver Neal in anything including his trilby, lol. Good grief that man can wear a burlap sac and make it look good. That was funny about June, bery subtle.

I really loved the combination of betrayal, angst, fluff and humour. You did an excellent job. I wish you would have developped a little more about the Elizabeth situation (loved the entire scene).
Cheers !

OMFG! I love this so so so so much ! Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it! This is PURE A-W-E-S-O-M-E-N-E-S-S !
It's just everything I've ever wanted to read in a White Collar fic! THANK YOU SO MUCH! You made my day! (and kinda ruined it because I'll spend a good part of it thinking about your fic and not working ! ;) )

Great writing! I love Peter & Neal together but I don't want Elisabeth hurt, so my idea of a slash story has exactly this problem, what about Elisabeth? That's the reason I stopped my ideas to flow, unfortunately :(

The end was absolutely perfect! really made me wanna read more, but awesome as it is, too! :)

I really did like these! Hands down my fave was Moz's! Lol

i have to say that the Jones one was probably my favorite one. I like how you handeled Elizabeth. Of course, the ending was the best part. You gotta love pillows. You write them incredibly well.

I love the fluff at the end... something about lips gently on a neck... makes me all warm and fuzzy ... mmmm mmmm mmm

This was wonderful, but I'm afraid I can't choose. Both Peter and Neal are so very delicious ;)

Heh. Nice one. Mozzie's reaction was my favorite.

Mozzie's scene: Most. Epically. Hilarious. Thing. EVER! I can totally see him freak out like (and me laughing my ass of because of it.) XD

...Ergh. It makes me sad to see a reaction like that from El, but it's also probably one of the more realistic possibilities out there. :(

But through it all, amazing job on this. I found an error or two in this, but I don't feel like pointing them out right now. I'm too happy.

Hope I see more White Collar fics from you someday.

Auf Wiedersehen!

-Naomi Hansen

Absolutely perfect :)

My favorite part of this whole story was the moment with El. As much as I love the White Collar fandom, I'm starting to get a little frustrated with the amount of slash fics that basically have her say, "You're sleeping with someone else? That's cool. Be back in time for dinner!" Realistically, this is a woman who loves her husband very much and has enough of a sense of self-worth to know that she deserves someone who loves her the same. I really enjoyed the fact that you didn't shy away from that. Instead of writing off her pain because "she's cool enough not to care if her husband cheats on her", you acknowledged it fully. I 3 that :)

Oh, and Peter and Neal's interactions are adorable. Made my day :D

This was amazing!

I loved how every character reacted differently to the relationship, and the fluff at the end?

Perfect.

Aw. Yeah, awkward conversations galore...

Ooh, ooh, I want character!

I...I need a minute.

Sweetheart, this is fantastic! Oh my God. I don't even know what to say.

I love June, she's adorable and Neal is just so mortified. Of course Jones knows, Neal. How could he not know? I think the one with Moz may be my favorite. It almost worked and then June just spilled the beans. Best line ever: "Did you screw him on the couch?" Oh, it's priceless. Elizabeth's reaction is exactly how I see it with her being very upset and feeling betrayed and Peter shutting down and Neal scrambling to make things right(and sort of failing). You handled Kate very well. Neal owned her in the scene. And the fluff? So adorable I sort of cried a little.

This was fantastic, my dear! And totally worth putting off work for.