i like this story

Ahh! i LOVE this! i wish it happened sosososososososososo SO bad in the actual show! they needed an ending like this! amazing job, really. one of the best one shots i've read!

This soooo should've happened in the show. Great Work :) two thumbs up

And your version is SO much better!

:D

This is what should have happened.

~Anneryn

haha loved it :) it was both cute, funny and romantic!

Once again...I like it. You might want to raise the rating to T. I don't know...*keeps my little sister protectively away from dudes and all knowledge of stuff*

LOL.

Once again, it was good, though. Sorry if I keep, like, giving you pep talks, or whatever...but I REALLY do like it. It makes me think of how it might've ended.

*pokes D.J. MacHale* A hug, really? Pft. Too bad you're busy writing your next series, bud...

haha i accidentally hit submit lol..sorry

anyways..

i loved it!

im so happy they kissed! i couldn't believe they didn't in the show! they just survived on a deserted island for 28 DAYS!

this came together very well.

i hope you right more! you really know how to capture the moment and the characters thoughts perfectly.

incredible

AMAZING!

that was PERFECT!

this is a really good story! i love the kiss scene. it is like the perfect m/j scene. not too mushy, not too boring.

love your discriptive writing. plz continue writing like this!