cuteeeeeeeeeee

Maybe it shouldn’t be a one-shot!

Awwwwwwwwww
This is sweet
:)

I love your story. No body really thinks about lily and scorpius getting married.

It was awesome and I love the episode of F.R.I.E.N.D.S

Very cute. This is like my fav ship other than Ron/Hermione.

I loved it!

ummmmm i like it but why is it rated M try T or K hope i didnt ofend u it was a good fic

awww it was cute D

This was a good story. Good grammar, spelling and punctuation. A bit short, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. It was just like a short glimpse into someone's life.

Cosmyk

I like the idea behind this, but I wish you had fleshed out the characters some more.

Oh - one thing REALLY pissed me off - why the HELL did Lily ask for a margarita if she's PREGNANT? How STUPID of her. You REALLY need to change that ASAP, because you should not be encouraging drinking alcohol while pregnant, of all things.

you completely ripped that entire storyline off of that one friends episode...the dialogue was lame, the story unoriginal and the characters undeveloped. im sorry, but it was just really bad.

sweet story :)

Aw that was really good! Scorpius' reaction was exactly how I would imagine anyone's would be.

One little correction though she wouldn't be Lily Scorpius Malfoy she would still be Lily Luna, just Mrs. Scorpius Malfoy which is what I'm sure you meant ]

Other than that loved loved loved it!