WAHHH! I WAS READING THIS WHILE LISTENING TO TORN APART (the one where Gin dies)
WHY YOU MAKE ME CRY ;(

It was beautifully written, though..

Awwwww! That was so sad! D: YOU JER- just kidding. But that was really sad. D:

I liked the format of this fic too. The simplicity but the vast-like description... I don't know how to explain it. At all. :D

It was really really good. This pairing is so cute and this fic was so angsty. I loved it~

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it was good.

i don't like capital letters, but that's because i'm a stranger like that (STRANGER DANGER O3O)

the lines were kinda choppy in my mind, but i overall liked the feel it gave off.

because gloom is sexayy. 3

~kero-chi

-sniff- when i was reading this i was hearing a very emotional music from an ichiruki amv and i really cried. very heart-touching. Bravo~!

Aw! So sad... but so sweet! I like it. It was well written.

WoW. that was so nice

This seemed a little more poem-y to me. The idea was really nice. More details would have been good

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WOW.

Amazing. Ichigo's words are so full of... okay, I can't describe it. But! With Rukia next to him, his last few minutes of life should be the happiest.

It's heartbreaking! 3

Very dramatic! Good! he has no sense of self-preservation,which is funny in a twisted way. He's dying and he doesn't care. Write more!Maybe with people who have some self-preservation.

I didn't cry, but I felt that sad feeling in your stomach that feels similar to guilt and love.

aw that's so sad '[ but still, it was wonderfully written. _