This isn’t LONG at all, but it is overly WORDY! Learn to be succinct!

There is always another option… In this case, simply refuse to play the game! Refuse to take either.

Pleasee update! i need more! ¿Cómo pudiste abandonarlo en la mejor parte? *lloro*

I love this already

Update sn carnt wait to c how tom nd harry get together nd who starts likin who first hpe its tom

I can't wait for some VoldemortxHarry romance! Love this story so far!

You evil

I was wondering… are you not going to continue this anymore? It was just getting interesting, too!
So, hopefully… (pleasePleasePLEASE!) you will update soon. :)

W-o-w. That was brilliant.

Poor Tom, Sev is right, in his own way, but Tom can handle it. Yes, Harry made it his own, lol!

Ahahahahahahah! I loooooooooooooooooved the speech! Is Harry awesome or what? Update!

I like ''smart smart Harry'' ( more, much more than bloody irrational and hysterical Harry) can't wait till he makes his mark and earns himself a priviledged position... i love the way he makes his own speech regardless of what's expected of him ! No more being a helpless pawn, bwahaha... ( i can totally see him putting a chess pawn into voldie's hand, and sitting down quite calmly to write his Will... then voldie will get all contemplative, snape will fly off his rocker then stop ( quite abruptly) thinking ''my its actualy quite clever for such a hopeless moron'' and then lucius, half pissed off, half good humoured, i'm not too sure yet...

Heya :) - I was just checking my favourite stories for up-dates and I stumbled across this one! - I just wanted to say congratulations for the rolling: finnishing university, getting a job as a screewriter, and having your first script for soap opera being aproved for television and getting married :) - That's all defiantly a good reason for not updating in a while :) - I hope you do find the time to translate the rest of the chapters soon though - This really is an awesome plot/story :)

do you think that is why me and many others have trouble finding a story that we read a while ago all I remember for sure is a few key facts as well as it was a M rated story.
but I am digressing from reviewing your story sorry this story is brilliant so far can't wait for more chapters if you are going to put them up, and if you are going to put them onto another website what that website is and if you are changing the name of the story or your name as author. either way I would love to read more.

LOVE IT