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This story's fucking insane. I don't know what this will mean to you, but it's definitely the best in the Power Stone category on this site. The characters are dead perfect. I know, because I'm gushing over Accel. I love your writing style as well, it's not rushed, the choice of details and descriptions are perfect (not too wordy, not too bare) and there's obviously a fantastic plot in store here.

One thing though, I'd assume Ryoma was Japanese...it seems he's Chinese in your story, unless you've made him some ambassador who happens to know the lay of the Chinese land and language. Anyway, that's nitpicking, but I wanted to feel like this review had substance so you'd take it more seriously. THIS STORY IS THE BOMB. THAT IS ALL.

Me: *nods* Very nicely done, although I haven't been able to play Power Stone 2 (and I only watched the anime version of PS), I can really feel the characters' personality. *thumbs up* Good job! Continue this! I can't wait for Rouge to arrive XD

Great story it got really good but you need to add more chapters soon don't leave people hanging. Keep up the good work!

Zehr Zehr kewl dude! Very cool indeed. Can't wait for everyone's favorite serial killer Jack to show up!

This is a good story so far, but the dialougue is a little... akward. Very good fighting scene at the beggining, an air battle would be nice. It needs more elaboration and chapters, but so far it's pretty good.

Hey, it's me. Just thought i'd take a little time to make a few points based on the info that i've seen in the reviews.

1) I haven't seen the anime (but it looks cool!) so please forgive the odd innaccuracy (Falcon's name etc.)

2) I don't think that i'm gonna pair up WangTang and Ayame (who, by the way, will make her grand debut soon!). I don't really know yet, anyway. I don't work off a plan, this is all off the top of my head! :p

If you got any other questions about the characters or this world, please don't hesitate to email me and ask, okay?

-Xyrer

are you going to pair up wang tang and ayame? cause I've seen that every where...how about Falcon and ayame from what I've heard that's what happens in the anime. It would be interesting to see that in a fanfic.

Can't wait for the Ayame/WangTang parts. _

Good work! I loved the portrayal of Julia and Ryoma, WangTang and Falcon interact well together! (lol...) In fact, I got a good sense of all the characters! (Gunrock's got the panda stick, lol...) Some nice description too, and the plot is moving forward well. Just one thing - some of your sentences are a little too long and convoluted - they could be broken up. But apart from that, great!

I LOVE Power Stone and I LOVE your story! Keep up the good work. I'll check back when there's a new chapter!

OOOO! Please continue! _

Okay, this is coming from a person who has only seen like 5 episodes of the anime, and I'm wondering if in the original video game for this is really that similar to the anime. Because I want to know if Ayame really DOES have a brother, he's hilarious in the anime! _ Anywho! This sound like a good story but I'm wondering if this is true information, or just stuff you made up for the purpose of this fanfic. _ Ah well! Only time will tell! _ Enough blab from me! On to chapter2! _

plz continue this story their aren't many people out their who do power stone stories much less continue them

Interesting. THe storyline is good, and the relationship of game to real life was done well.

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