Reviews for M A G I C |
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creativesm75 chapter 1 . 9/5/2015 BRILLIANT. |
Anon chapter 1 . 6/18/2014 This was so cute and well-done! Especially considering that only three topic words were of your own choosing. I enjoyed reading this a lot. It made me sad sometimes, and it made me laugh sometimes. And that last line... That last line is what finally made me tear up. Good job, overall. |
xSakuraRosesx chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 Amazing job! |
Applecrow chapter 1 . 2/1/2011 I absolutely adore this, particularly fat because it really brings out Beato's self-consciousness when it comes to Battler. That aspect of their relationship is very charming. Also, water and gravity had a very nice word play to them. |
trolololololololololololo chapter 1 . 1/28/2010 My favorites were 08 and 31, they just made me lol XD oh and 32 was so adorable! X3 |
Immortal x Snow chapter 1 . 1/17/2010 Hm. I think you threw in troll. For sure. XD These were really beautiful. Some made me tear up, some made me laugh so hard I woke up my family (whoops). I think my personal favorites were eight and thirty. Now I wanna write something in which Beato gets her clothes stolen. Or steals Battler's. *thinks* Good job, overall - you have good grammar and spelling. _ Love, ~Immortal x Snow |
beautifly92 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010 I loved it! My favourites: -Truth -Forbidden -Question -Devotion -Envy Special mention to: Sex, Good, Fantasy, Fun and Old. The cutest: Magic Haha sorry, I just HAD to point them out xD What an awesome oneshot, or rather collection of ubershort drabbles xD |
hell-butterfly chapter 1 . 1/16/2010 probably the best umineko fic I ever read, you captured these two so beautifully and poignantly, ah so tragic and bittersweet, just why I love them so much. And 22-24 just make me want to cry. |
Krile chapter 1 . 1/16/2010 You just summarized for me in 50 sentences all the reasons why I love this pairing so much. Great job! |
Niha-chan chapter 1 . 1/16/2010 I love all of these, you did a fantastic job! Number 15 has got to be my favourite though |
can I have a new username chapter 1 . 1/16/2010 4's the best :) |
thisprofileisdead chapter 1 . 1/16/2010 Some sentences made me smile, others reminded me why this pairing is so tragic(ally beautiful). I can't even pick a favorite because they are all lovely. Write more, write more! |
Avistella chapter 1 . 1/16/2010 Damn, this was so fricken' epic! I loved it so much! I must say, your vocabulary is amazing. |
Jane Poirot chapter 1 . 1/15/2010 Aww...this is an adorable little oneshot. It starts out sweet, then ends bittersweet. How tragic. My favourite one would have to be 31, just because Gaap's question is hilarious, lol. |