Poor Shinobu...sicker than a dog! But at least he's got Miyagi, such a freaking sweetie even if he would never admit to it!

This was so sweet. I loved it! Good job!

Awwww! That was so cute! I loved it! :D

A sweet fic.

I thought the characters were in character.

Well done on this being your first fanfic!

Thank you for writing!

~Aoshi

Aww! I really liked this. It was super touching and Shinobu and Miyagi were definitely in character. It was also cool to see inside Miyagi's head. The dialogue really worked well in pulling everything together. Good job!

Nice!

wonderiful.

it was adorable but if that's the whole fic you should mark it as complete _

I'll tell you this, I don't normally read K stories cause I'm addicted to porn or something, although I like fluff just as much as the next person. This was really sweet, but not like too much sugar sweet. There were a few general grammar errors, but unless you feel like it you won't have to bother with it. Read your story out loud to yourself and see if it sounds right. Can't wait to see what you whip up next! Just a thought, but Nowaki is a doctor so ya'know. Just to give you somewhere to go.

Sincerly,

Shadow101202

This was so cute!

This is good! -

Very Adorable!

One of the first i've read with this pairing that Isn't ooc :)

Good job!

Aw so cute!

Aww, I thought it was very sweet. Some grammar mistakes, but other than that, I loved it _

This is SO adorable! And your first fanfic too! *squeals and cuddles you* My first fanfic was dark and violent... O_O' But update soon ne!