Reviews for Shattered Innocence |
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Latarra chapter 24 . 8/15 Another great story about true family. |
13920249-Deleted -this-account chapter 24 . 8/12 That was great. |
Dee474 chapter 24 . 10/12/2019 another wonderful tear-jerker. |
AimeeMcGee chapter 24 . 9/26/2019 Wow, thank you so much for being able talking about such hard subjects while writing a wonderful story! Tim is an incredible character, my favorite, and I thank you very much for what you've done. |
DU chapter 6 . 6/2/2019 Wow!? Good and bad story! I would like to say that the police would have looked for and questioned Abby as soon as they knew she was with Sarah. Not days later. And that Abby would not have pushed Sarah into something she didn’t want to do or leave her there. Ever. Also gives would not have beat up Mcgee ever. That is so over the top. Also Her friends would not have treated her like the enemy before they really knew what happened. |
M-chanchen chapter 24 . 3/5/2019 Hi, wow, this story is really cool and very great. I enjoyed reading it very much. You did a very good job at writing. I especially love how they dissolved all their issues with each other and grew together. |
11586209-Delete-Please chapter 24 . 1/1/2019 That was a great story I liked it. |
SumNumb3rs chapter 22 . 11/12/2018 Reading this again for the umpteenth time! What gets to me in this chapter and, I think, the last chapter, is that Becky chose to abandon Tim, too. I just don't see a good reason she didn't approach him after he left his parents home or when he became an adult. If I was him, I would have thought that, another reason for him thinking along the lines of him 'not being worth it' in even his sister's eyes. I would expect him to be privately, very hurt be that, especially knowing what his parents were capable of. Poor Tim! |
jadethetroll chapter 23 . 7/14/2018 you write amazing. your storys are really good to read and well thought out. but wayyyy to dark for me. imma go deal with nightmares but keep writing its really good |
Delete-account-please-10315449 chapter 24 . 2/19/2018 Very good story I enjoy reading. I hope you might do a squeal. |
Runewulf chapter 24 . 8/2/2017 Very satisfying, all sorted. Hope Abby stays stable, unless you're thinking of giving another tale to be bats in :) |
Runewulf chapter 20 . 8/2/2017 Very well written, I enjoyed that. |
Runewulf chapter 18 . 7/30/2017 Oh my, how you know how to play with hearts. |
Runewulf chapter 4 . 7/30/2017 Oh no, Tony shouldn't break in, Sarah should listen and hindsight is 20 20 Is this going to end horribly? |
Runewulf chapter 12 . 7/26/2017 The disturbing picture you paint is painfully true to life for some people. |