Love, love, love this!

Just dropping a line to say I think this story is gorgeous. I haven't even watched a lot of this show, but the characters come shining through in your writing. Very well done.

Aww this was perfect! And a lot more in character than a lot of other LtM fanfics I've read lately 3

Very nice... I love the "That'll do" lol!

This was beautifully done - really captured the character dynamics. Would it be too forward for me to suggest that you turn your hand to some 'M' stories? ; )

Wonderful story :)

This story is absolutely amazing. I read it last night, but couldn't review, so I read it again today and it was still as amazing.

I really can see things happening like that. I don't think they're ready yet to actually kiss; but a 'fight' like this seems very likely to say the least. Because it's all true, and there has to come some kind of boiling point. And I think you described that very well.

I loved it! I loved it! And one more time... I loved it!

That's astonishing! Well done!

Surepb work!

I really loved this! You write Cal and Gillian so well, and have really taken your time with this. There's something adorable about Cal's reluctance to follow Gillian's lead; having her as the instigator of the next step in their relationship is perfect in this context.

I loved the way you described their intimacy. This is going in my favourites for a rainy day!

One of my favourite stories, dear.

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.

Keep writing! :D

Brilliant ! you captured both characters fears perfectly and created a situation and conversation where they realalistically could come together! more please

Great job!I loved it:)

I absolutely love it! It's definitely going on my favourites list.

that was so good!

thank you so much for sharing it!

:)

Wow! Beautiful story! It's written so well. How you describe almost every action, I loved the dialogue. In the beginning I was confused, just as Cal about what was going on, really great how you wrote that. I love it!