Oh my God, no. That was so sweet but no, you can not just go and kill Jim like that, nope, I refuse to belive that.

Oh gosh this made me cry. It so very sad. :/

As funny as it sounds, Thank you for making me cry. It was just so _, ya know? No words to describe it.

I kept coming across this fic and finally decided to read it. It's incredibly good. Sad, heart-wrenching, and beautifully done. I am saddened by the fact that you have so few reviews, but I think that may be due to your summary. It sounds very sexual, not like they're in sickbay. *shrug*

Really, really good.

~ Umbrae

OMG! That's so sad! I have a feeling Spock is going to try to follow Jim. That was a really good story!

Thank you. Now I'm sad. This was really good and I enjoyed it immensely.

Verdaderamente espléndido, muy bello. Es difícil hallar fics trágicos que realmente te duelan. Me recordaste la capacidad de los vulcanos, de detener su propio corazón, si así lo desean. Mil gracias por escribir este. Namasté. FantasmaAlineal.

I now feel like curling up on my bed and whimpering like a kicked puppy. That is tragic beyond all reason.

Could do a follow up - Spock could sabotage himself and then wait to die. Technically, he was poisoned by teh arrow too.

Good god, I'm masochistic O_O

Queenie xx

guh...heart breaking

I hate death fics. But of course, I had to read it. Lord, I almost crrieed! Nice job. It was tres magnifique!

That was sad... *Tear*

I haven't made up my mind yet - did I enjoy this because it was heartwenchingly sad, or did I not because it was heartwrenchingly sad?

XD (I enjoyed it, don't worry.)

I love how you were able to put a lot of emotion into the story. A small thing that bothered me was that your writing was a bit too choppy at the beginning - near the end it gets a bit smoother and any choppiness left over fits the situation.

Please write some more!

~Of Glorious Plumage

Oh! That was mean! You made me cry! But it was a beautiful piece of work and it was written very well. Still made me cry though. Great work, even if it was so sad! :D 10/10!

Hey.

ok that was very Angsty.

It made me cry. poor spock.

but I thought that it was good.

well done

violet44 xx

OMS that was so sad i am crying right now great job