Reviews for With the dursleys
something-siriusly-wrong chapter 13 . 4/15
Is he really sure that's a good idea?
something-siriusly-wrong chapter 6 . 4/15
They couldn't have come soon enough
something-siriusly-wrong chapter 5 . 4/15
I see Sirius finally pulled his sit together and is coming to the rescue ( Merlin bless him )
something-siriusly-wrong chapter 4 . 4/15
Has Vernon snapped completely? I'm intrigued
something-siriusly-wrong chapter 2 . 4/15
Poor Harry, I really hope Sirius is trying to adopt or take custody of Harry and not ignoring him
Blue eyed titan99 chapter 27 . 12/30/2019
Please update
LadyClassical chapter 2 . 7/24/2019
Just to let you know, that little comment wasn't the last thing Sirius ever said to Harry. He said it before Winter Break, and even so, he contacts them in the Floo before Christmas Break. He's the one who makes the first move. Harry was never angry at Sirius, he just felt guilty because if it weren't for Sirius he wouldn't be going into Hogsmeade. Then there's Sirius's head in the fire saying a cheerful "Hi." I'm guessing he's just taking Harry's lead and not mentioning it. I'm sure if Harry ever brought it up again, he would apologize, but likely they'd just forgotten by Winter Break. Of course, the readers never forget!
Random User123456789 chapter 27 . 10/27/2017
I absolutely love how harry has been portrayed in the story so far. I would like to see a bit more action and consequence in further chapters but part from that you grammar and spelling is amazing and I can't wait for another chapter!
Bouncerok chapter 27 . 4/10/2017
I just love this. I hope there will be more in the future
Guest chapter 24 . 4/1/2017
Couple of things. One I was not a fan of Harry forgiving Remus (or Sirius for the matter) so quickly for looking into the pensieve. What they did was incredibly wrong, bordering on plain cruel- especially Remus who knew exactly what he was going to find. It was up to Harry to tell them WHEN HE WAS READY. Sirius and Remus should have talked to him before going to Ron too but at least I could see where they want a bit more information.
Also this is more personal preference but I wish you had had Sirius be the first person that Harry ever said I love you to. Despite whatever some people might think Remus and Sirius DO NOT have an equal place in Harry's life and it's not because Remus is a werewolf. It's because he didn't even tell Harry at first that he knew his father. It's because Remus never wrote to him at school. Or went out of his way to be a part of Harry'a life. If Sirius had really gone free in the books I don't see Remus actually moving in themail, visiting frequently absolutely bit they wouldn't just be one big family. Remember 12 years passed between Remus and Sirius spendingredients time together and both had suspected the other of being a traitor at one time.
But to get to the point- harry should be pissed at these two for constantly invading his privacy and then shouting out that he was abused in front of everyone at the Burrow
why chapter 13 . 1/6/2017
Your fucking A/Ns are the most fucking annoying things ever. Goddamn no one cares about your fucking comments. Just put them at the end. Also, if you're not sure how to fucking spell something, either fucking look it up or take your best guess. There's no fucking reason to use those fucking (so?) notes like a fucking moron.
Guest chapter 27 . 4/13/2016
Wow, just, wow! This is amazing and I have loved reading it, well done! I would love to hear if Harry becomes an amungus! Please write more!
Chaos'Daugther chapter 8 . 3/11/2016
No Moony. You're not overreacting you're under reacting. START OVERREACTING!
Guest chapter 23 . 2/22/2016
great writing!
Guest chapter 10 . 3/15/2015
I really like the concept, but there are a few things you could definetly work on. For one, COMMAS ARE YOUR FRIEND; please use them generously. Also, the characters seem a little out of character at times as well. Lastly, the pacing is just a little off. I would not really think that Sirius would have gotten an owl back from Hermione maybe 15 minutes after he send the letter. Anyways, it's bloody brilliant. Keep up the good work!
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