Nm lol

why does everybody forget about matthew alfred twin bro xD

;-;

There's so many spelling errors, it's killing me inside.

Damn. Ain't those a friendly gang of grunts. Too bad they're the minor antagonists of the story...

gReaT story, okay-bordering-to-below-average spelling and grammar.

Fucking deal with your "you're" and "your". There's a difference.

So...Alfred's missing?

Noooo acabo de encontrar esta historia y siento que la amo demasiado para que acabe asi

By the way, good job with the story. It's really good. And ignore all the people who beg/plead for you to continue the story. You can continue it if you want to but it's entirely your own decision.

I don't know if you will read this review but who cares. I just wanted to say don't mind. Who cares if you don't finish the story. It's your fanfiction that you created. Everyone has there ups and downs and a lot of authors experience writer's block. Try doing something good with your life and have it payed back in full. Even a smile can light up someone's life.

Okay, I just have to say that this is epically awesome! And I want to up, but first I have a suggestion for you, if you could pm me back? Loved this!

Actually I think that it was both, mostly the British though.

Great story so far! :)

You actually got all the french right! Nice job!