Sorry, I just cant! I really really cant. It's too awful for words. The spelling, the writing, it's just awful.

Oh my God. I loved this story so much. I love it’s ending as well. It was written very well.

I'll be honest, I laughed through most of this. While the idea is really good and initially what kept me reading the actual writing is just ... so bad. Some of the lines and logic in here were so chessy and ridiculous that I almost fell of my chair laughing. I really should not have enjoyed this as much as I did but oh well.

Severus doesn’t have an o in it

Nice ending.
You're a great author

I love the story line but please make it more realistic.
From what i know someone doesn't go from severe abuse and attempted rape to be kissing and being so relaxed with someone who has tried to kill him for years.
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Okey the ending made me cry. It was so sad but so beautiful. You are very good at this.

Oh my god I loved it it was amazing one of the best fics ever made!

Such a sweet fic with a sweet ending

Awww

Cute story thanks for writing it.

I for one love how this story and summary turn out its very well done.

wow

I have to say this was by far one of my favorite fanfictions! You are an amazing writer and I hope you always continue writing.

Your plot is really good but I really think you should either rewrite it or get a beta.