,I loved this story so much I put it in my Baby community. Thank you for sharing it.

I gotta say this is one of my favorite fan fics. The characterizations were spot on. Still, I have to think the story was highly improbable. Sam and Dean know how to hot wire cars so they wouldn't have been without transportation for long. They also know how to pick locks and disable alarms so once a store closed for the night they would have had a warm place to stay. If worse came to worse Sam could have called an ambulance and spent the night sitting in the emergency room while his brother was examined. I'm sure every city has a hospital where they take vagrants so insurance and even ID would not have been a problem. Furthermore, hospitals of this sort are invariably in the inner city so once they were released they would have been near shelters and food.

Still, I liked this story thoroughly enjoyed how it was ultimately resolved.

I'm so glad she found them :0)
Oh and I have those knees...it's just as crappy as you describe it.
DeansBabyBird

You can write some dark fic. Freezing and homeless with the Impala stolen is an all too possible future. The boys live WAY to close to the edge. I'm glad you wrote them back into the car.

I loved it, simply and utterly loved it.

I absolutely, absolutely adore you for this story. It's subtle but very rich at the same time, but what really grabs at me and sticks with me long after reading it is your skillful hand at the depiction of an almost casual, creeping despair. I don't think it's just with this fic in particular, but your writing is generally very atmospheric. Excellent, excellent job :)

Loved this - the stark poverty was so sudden. Loved where they went looking for heat, and the rumble of the Impala and their reaction. Beautifully done.

Phoebe

Nicely done - that tone of weary resignation at what they have to deal with as each new possibility is dashed. A funny/ sad situation and nice flashes of the humour of Winchester brotherly dialogue.

I liked your story.

It was an interesting idea, showing how close the brothers are to being homeless without the Impala and any funds in their pockets.

You did a great job writing the brothers in their AU, even though you warned us Dean had arthritis, I didn't realize you meant it until I read the story.

Great job describing the scenes of snow and cold that Dean and Sam were experiencing as they wandered the streets.

Nice ending. The Impala found them.

Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Wow, that was...Great. I honestly didn't expect this kind of story (I'll try to read more into this verse), so...is dark the word? It feels more like "desolation", but don't mind a non-native like me. Anyway, the setting was so accurate and powerful that I could feel the cold. The snow. The silence. And the boys thrown into it, lost within it when they lose they home. It was agonic how everything they tried went wrong, even if it felt like inexorable on every step.

When they huddled together and started to laugh silly was just sad and perfect.

Thanks for sharin!

Great story with just the right amount of brotherly love.

"Sammy. We don't have too many options, here. You're gonna have to sell your ass."

I think I love you.

That was a really neat fic. Had an oddly O. Henry feel to it. You don't realize how close they are to the edge of destitution until you read something like that. I loved both the idea and the matter-of-fact delivery.

that was a cool story that I really enjoyed. Good brotherly love there, and given it's just that cold where I live, I can totally sympathize

I liked the exploration of Dean and Sam without their home but couldn't really see why you have introduced the arthritis element (but I haven't read any of your other stories so maybe missing something)