While I doubt this will reach you, I would just like to say this is fantastically well-written, both in terms of character and all the technical details of Raven's heart. I'm grateful you posted this online, for all the world to see.

I very much hope that you're still writing, whether fanfiction or wholly original content, and hope it brings you joy.

To any new reader trawling the reviews, I urge you to give this one a shot. It is incomplete, but has excellent character writing and gets into post-game politics in an excellent way.

Hardly doubt this will ever get updated after so many years(a very small part of me still hopes xD) but I thought I'd leave a review anyways.

I read this first when I first played the xbox360 version, reread it after a couple years after and now I reread it again after playing the switch version.

By far my most favorite fanfiction of the series and will always hold a special place in my heart even after all these years.

I know there's very little chance this story will see any updates after so long, but after playing the recently released ToV: Definitive Edition, this story was still a treat to read. Your writing style is good, conveying both characters definitive feelings along with their doubts, all while keeping things moving at a regular clip and keeping the scenario moving forward. Very nice, thank you.

And so, i have once again finished this fic. Ahhh, to see its completion would be a dream come true...
Oh well. I can only imagaine the rest, i suppose...

Thank you, once again :)
And though it is unlikely, i sincerely hope that you come back to this one day.

Duuuuuuude. I really wish i had the stamina to write as much as you do. Ive been trying but...
Well, im trying.

Once again, thank you! :)

:)

Ooh, you said that this initially started out as a birthday present. Yeah, makes sense that you would stop after the day has come and gone. Nevertheless, its a great story and ill continue to reread it for many years to come. Just in case you ever want to come back to this, unlikely as it is.

Thank you! :)

Whoa, ioder is 15?
DANG, BOY! Im impressed he has survived the council so long while actually holding power.

Also. I really want to see yuri and estelle get married! :)
So much!

Kekekekekeke :)
If there is one thing most importaint about raven, its that he's pretty smart :)

Tha k you!

n.n"
Yeah, things are gonna pick up a bit.
Honestly, one of the worst thinga about this fic not being finished is not getting to see yuri and estelle get married, ya know? That and seeing raven get better(hopefully...)

Well, thank you! :)

*flaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiils*
Every time i read this, its like its for the first time and im just really tense and kinda scared

Thank you! :)

Mmmmm...
A tense and grim chapter.
Next is the big operation.
Also...what was estelle crying about? Ive read this before but i guess i forgot...
Hmm...

Anyway, thank you!

Yo, have you read the empty mask yet? Its a manga about raven's past. I could totally steer you in the right direction if you wished :)

Also, thank you for yet another great chapter! Id really like to see a fic about rita as a child through her eyes, while it was happening and such. That would be great :)

Ya know, id actually love to see repedes puppies :)
And estelle raising hers and playing with it and potty training it...
Its pretty cute :)

Thank you!

You really write a great rita :)