So sad, felt sympathy for the girl. It's well-written. Thank you.

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Second person is tricky to write, but you pulled it off nicely. I like how this was told in the POV of the OC. I feel for her, and I don't know why. I like the melancholic tone this fic has. Awesome as always, doro. _

Pororo why are you so good at angst?

I think you paced this just the right way. It starts beautifully slow, and then The Girlfriend comes out of nowhere, but I feel like it's supposed to be that way because the narrator feels that she does. And then the end where there were no stars but then she imagined them and made wishes on imaginary stars made me want to cry.

So yeah. Write more fics. You have a gift with angst, and you need to show it off.

I really like this actually, even though I've never really seen any Prince of Tennis things if you don't count that one episode that was playing on Cartoon Network one day that was friggin horribly dubbed that I watched out of boredom.

For some reason, I adore second person usage, probably because people don't use it too much, and the way you did it was great (wow that came out kind of strange sounding but you know what I mean right haha XD)

This is nice. Even though it's told solely through the unknown female's point of view, it deals with a very universal theme, and I can see myself in her position. It has that kind of personalised quality to it, which I like.

This doesn't feel like your normal tone of writing, though, so it does sort of feel forced at times, but that's only a minor wrinkle and it may be just be me. In any case, good job with this and I hope you get more reviews with time! D

I detest fics in second person and I almost always dislike OC fics.

I love this piece.

Honestly, truly find it incredibly interesting. (And, though it isn't necessarily related for some reason this piece made me realize why CanonOC chapter fics almost never work - it's the same reason writing a chapter fic with no plot other than two canon characters falling in love doesn't often work: there's no tension or conflict, nothing going on. Right, off of that tangent.)

I'm not sure if it's the French background music I've got on, the fact that I just watched UP again, but perhaps just how tangible the emotions feel. Perhaps it's the simplicity of the fact that you don't' bother going into full-fledged detail like so many authors to describe the OC. You focused on what was important - the feelings and the small details about /him/ instead of her - and that, like the road less traveled (perhaps because this /is/ the road less traveled) has made all the difference.

~SC