IT MADE ME BAWL!

Loved it. :) :) :)

:) So good! I'm shocked at how easily you rhyme words :O I'm so bad at it... XD

Aqua

I love this poem! I would really appreciate it if you would read my stories. They are Playing With Fire and Behind the Sea. They are Percy Jackson fanfics.

I love it! Touching and sad!

Wow. Wowowowowowow. That was good! Like, just, wow. Really. The ending was really perfect too. Really, just, good job.

I loved it :-)

Wow, this is really beautiful.

I love Prim's sweet caring nature. I never thought of Katniss as particularly sweet, but the other words you used to describe her are certainly right on the mark.

Well done!

Right, I'm off to read your other two stories.

Bye :)

-A Grinning Princess.

Ngaaaaawwww! this made me cry! (well not really but i felt like it lol) AMAZING! :)

Awww, it's sweet. And deep. Not the most complex, but it gets the job done. It's simple. I really like it. Great job.

Hey! I've been reading the Hunger Games lately, and I remembered you had a HG fic, so I came to check it out. It wasn't bad at all for experimenting! I really liked it.

Two things. First, I think reading would have been easier and flowy-er if there were stanzas instead of lines and lines. That's most likely FF's fault. I tried poetry once, too, and had to fix that and junk cuz of the format they I had it at before. Then, also in the middle- more toward the end- I got a little lost. But again, that's mostly because of the format. it was very late when I actually read your poem...

You should do more Hunger Games fanfiction _ You don't have to of course, but I'd totally read 'em if you did. Wait a sec...

OOOOoooHHHHHHhhh! HOW WAS EUROPE AND ENGLAND? Hahaha, I just remember you mentioning going to England. How was it? Was it super snaztastic? Did you see any cool fancy hats?

Yeah... I just went spazzy right there. Great poem~

Awww... That is Adorable

Oh wow. This is amazing. The format and the rhymes and the whole set-up is fantastic. I think Prim's point of view in your poem is awesome, and it made me want to read more even when the poem was over. You should write another one because you are extremely talented. :)

absolutly loved it!

you should do more things like that.

that was amaxing. loved it!

I can honestly say that was one of the best poems I have ever read. This is a truly amazing poem.