AWESOME PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER I LOVE THIS FAN FIC

""Girls are weird," Edward said, his small nose wrinkling in apparent disdain. "All they do is giggle."

"Not all girls. Your mom's a girl."

Edward looked up at his mother before stamping his foot in frustration and glaring at Winry.

"Nuh-uh!"

The adults thought that was really funny."

That part really made me laugh. Little Ed's so cute!

This story is so heartbreaking and sad. I think you wrote it perfectly.

;-; ... oh no... hohenhiem don't leave him! btw, this is great!

waiting eagerly for your update,

RLR

I'm particularly fond of the last line. Again, this was nice and the description was straightforward and clear.

The writing was nice, though it was simple and there was quite a bit of dialogue. The little exchanges between the characters were very sweet and it was a rather enjoyable read.

that was so cute with Hoenheim and Ed in both chapters. Update soon!

Hey! Adorable! And please, you have just the right amount of dialogue. I would MUCH rather read dialogue than blocks of narration. Very cute! I want to read more FMA from you. :)

Aww. That was really cute. Nice job! :D