Well that was really dark...

If Sasuke's dad died 10 years ago and he's 15 now, but he was driving that day, wasn't Sssuke only 5 years old?

This story has horrified me just as much as it has captivated me, which I guess in a sense, has the same effect. Bravo

Ha. you remind me of Natsuo Kirino. Her 'Out' was the first disturbing novel I read. I was always afraid my Father would find I was reading something awful (?) then I remembered my Father didn't read xD

Wow... this was... very good! I mean... psychologically. I like it! :D

wow.

As I read this, I kept struggling to remember what this style reminded me of - it just felt as if I should know this style, and
the last note finally gave me my answer. While this fic is quite
different from Elysium, both in subject matter and style, for some reason it kept reminding me of it. The wonderful way you depicted their psychologies, and the feeling of disconnection from reality prevailing in the fic, I think.

I don't know why I didn't check out your works after reading Elysium, but man, have I been missing out on something! I'll now be heading over to your profile. I'm sorry that this review was a waste of time since it offers no ConCrit whatsoever, but I don't really feel like it lacks anything. Its one of those pieces -like Elysium - which leave you with a sense not of perfection, but of completion. It might very well be made better (though I don't know how) but you don't want it to be. Its complete the way it is, and you just want to leave it that way regardless of any possible flaws or potential improvements,

And I especially like how the last note points out that they are NOT crazy. Indeed, I've often noticed that the minds of men labelled as 'crazy' or 'insane' often make the most interesting sketches, and I feel that while in conventional senses some might label Sasuke and Naruto here as insane, that would be pretty much a cop out.

truly enjoyed it, i didnt need to read it multiple times to understand. Should i say mind blowing nah not the word 'twas pleasantly mind refreshing. Pretence is famliar to most humans, to be urself without care is priceless. Narutoxsasuke found themselves, who they really were that isnt insanity might i dare say evolution or a winter cicada. Anyway i was captivated to the end.

I love how you portray the characters. Naruto with his almost callous actions. He's very aloof and yet he probably feels just as emotional as Sasuke. Sasuke almost seems crazy and yet he isn't. I really love how you added such depth to the Naruto and Sasuke. This story was amazing but the only down side was the ending. The ending was fitting but it left me wanting more. Did they go to prison for life? Did they meet in prison? Anyways, I applaud you for a job well done. Really great one-shot.

I liked it. Even though Naruto was not like the original Naruto, the persuasiveness of the original Naruto still remains in this one, which makes him a believable character. I loved Sasuke, especially. Thanks for writing,

greetings,

flayne

This was dark and great!

This was some very deep shit. I totally understood it.

I like your writing style. It's kinda similar to my own evolved writing style (not the one I post on fanfic net, they are so horrible XP)

But anyway, your style is like... Well, special. And mature. Haha. I don't make sense. But anyway, it's great! So please continue producing quality work! :D

i've never read the real story but this is good. very very dark.

Messes up train of thought for both of them... crazy~ but wonderful story.