this was so cute

Very sweet :)

Not bad for a first story. I think you managed to keep them in character quite well.

Really liked it, but the end I feel could use some work. besides from that I loved it! :)

That was awesome

:) wow nejis so romantic in a simple way

i love it!it's so nice!3

:D

I really liked this story :D

love it :D

That was a very good story. The beginning was fantastic and showed your writing skill at it's very best. Everything was spelt right and your grammar was pretty good but if you don't mind me pointing out, you kinda used too many commas. It's nothing major, it's just that there were a few instances where there was a comma and there shouldn't have been. Another thing I liked about this story was the fact that, were Neji and Tenten to get together in the anime/manga, I really could see it happening along these lines. _

SIMPLY sweet.

This was a simple story, but yet nothing could be sweeter. :)

Well done.

i love this.. simple, sweet, and a great idea for your first on this pairing xP

loved it x x

Man... I can imagine the expression on everyone's faces when Neji and Tenten just come out of nowhere and like, have a wedding. They'd probably go like, "OHMYGAWDS!"

So... umm.. yeah.

I reeally liked this one-shot. 8D Thank you so much for writing it. It was so... simple. XD

cool...really simple.

adorable :)