Awesome cliffhanger :)

i want a continuation.

"Goten," Bro started, "I'm pregnant."
Goten's breath caught, and braced for Vegeta's outburst but all he heard from him was "What?" It was barley a whisper. Bra was going to be 16 and pregnant. Bulma fainted, Vegeta catching her. Chichi had fainted when the words were out of Bra's mouth. Goku was grinning, holding onto Chichi.

Please continue or make a sequel i can help

Continue it!

I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE THIS FANFICTION BECAUSE I WANNA SEE THE LOOK ON HIS FACE WHEN SHE SAID IM PREGNANT

please continue because i want to know that what will goten do

( me with all my OC characters, which are quite a lot. I dunno if they're exactly OC I use them in any story I make. ) OC characters and me: CONTINUATION CONTINUATION CONTINUATION CONTINUATION( repeats 1000x ) Pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssssee eeeeeee? ** cutest puppy dog eyes **

That's probably the cruelest cliffhanger you have ever made. You most definitely must make the sequel

LUVD IT LUVD IT LUVD IT LUVD IT LUVD IT LUUUUUUUUUUUUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV VVVVDDDDDDDDDDDD IT! U sld mak mor Gohan nd Videl time thgh.

I loved this story, and i would like to see more. Maybe have a pee related incident when Goten changes the baby's daiper. girls do it too, they're just less able to aim.

I give this story 9/10 there are a few spelling errors like can instead of can't back when Goten was telling Vegeta how strong he was, and how Goku "Can't"beat him

yes i want you to continue it's really fun so please and

nice plot, i enjoyed it. i was actually looking foward to having each and every one of the gang possessed so i could find out what dear ol' goku's darkest desire would be, or chichi for that matter...he..heh...

i felt however that you didnt give enuf meat to the story, the plot was there, the characters, the action, and the storyline was moving along rather nicely, but it was devoid of emotion. everything was just happening and we dnt really get a chance to feel with or feel for the characters in their pain/sorrow/regret/rage/lust etc. all the emotions that were there on the surface, i dnt get to touch on them as a reader coz everything was just happening. it was a nice touch with vegeta crying and all - moments like that, there could have been some xtra meat to fatten up the scenes.

but otherwise, yeah, it was a bit on the dark side, but even the darkness dnt really come forth fluently coz all the underlying angst was not explored.

enjoyed reading it tho, its nice to find a fic that can surprise you

gosh, i was going to wait and review after chapter 10 but gosh, this is terrible...poor bra, what kind of a dark and twisted story is this?

ok, i took a few sips of my beer, i can continue now...

i really like the story so far keep it up