So so so SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good. I liked it. It was so good

Hi... I read some of your story, but it was a bit dry for my liking. I took some notes for the parts that I did read, please take them into consideration if you ever edit thi story.

arswhole take out the w

"but really only when the topic on Quidditch" you need an 'is'. ex: "when the topic is on quidditch".

I love the idea of Lucius cleaning when he's angry. It's hilarious.

i readed this along time ago but forgot to review and its amazing

I love your story, it's very good and a bit funny since I never would have thought of Lucius cleaning the manor when he's angry:))

nice story! :)

I'm amazed that this doesn't have more reviews! Amazing job! D

I'm surprised this hasn't had any reviews yet! I loved it, thought it was great :D.

~Jasmine