LAWL at the ending and AWWWWWWWWWW at the rest XDDDD Great story I loved it u

The idea was sweet but I think the story was too short. There should have been more about Matts fear and memories.

Also:
Sorry, but begging for reviews like that is annoying.
I know you took the effort to write this and you share it here. I totally understand that you want to get reviews, but this begging ("Review or I'll die") along with desrespecting your readers ("if you have a problem with it, why the FUCK are you reading this") actually makes people NOT want to review.
I didn't want to as well because of your rambling at the end (and also the Note in the beginning) but I thought I just had to tell you that you are ruining your chances of getting reviews yourself with this.

Awww. This was so adorable! In my opinion, I like MelloxMatt... but Near is sooo cute as well. MattxNear is kinda cute and so is MelloxNear. But I still love MelloxMatt. Just too adorable. Lol. Anyway... I love your stories. Make more soon! Please?

-KTS

Well, how could I refuse a request from Mello?

I love this fic, it's so cute! Poor Matt. If I was his mom, I would never do that! Young!Matt is just too cute!

Mello can be nicer than your average psycho, if he wants to! But only to Matt. And me, please? I kinda don't want to get shot, and I absolutely love Mello, and you don't really care do you.

Well, anyways, nice fic! Going on the favorites, definitely!

Peace, Love, and Cherries!

I love you. Lots and lots :)

And to help you with the issue that is MelloxMatt or MelloxNear, well...why not a threesome? -

I don't quite know why I choose this story to review on. I also don't quite know why I like stories about fear and comfort. You have VERY good taste in characters. Near...Matt...Mello...L... They rock. I like Beyond Birthday, too.

I like this story very much so. The ending wasn't cheesy at all. I found it rather cute. Mello and Matt make a good couple.

Aww thanks all of u who reviewed! You guys make me feel so special lol! :)

awwie! dat was so kawaii!

AW that was soo cute in an angsty sort of way :D I love protective Mello and laughed ending conversation with Matt and Mello :D

lol

Cheers to this story!

Cute idea. However, I think you could have expanded it a whole lot. I just don't think you gave the idea justice in such a short format. But, like I said, it was cute. Your writing is good, just work on story development.

One other note of constructive critcism. No authors note in the middle of the story. Sorry, it just really gets me.

Please don't take this as a flame, but rather as one writer offering advice to another.

Good luck in future writing. ]

Aw, that was amazingly cute.