Squeeeee! Beautiful! Well written and enthralling to the end.

kyaaaa! I'm so fangirly right now! I loved this pairing! it's so well done

I really really love your story, it's beautiful and sad and happy and cute at the same time ! Your Chad and your Kyouraku are really in character. I wanted to hug both of them halfway in the story, or throw them at each other, or...
Congratulations for this beautiful story !

"It's hard to determine the borders of himself- here is a stretch of his arm which is not touching Sado, that is his, but his chest seems to have two hearts, two sets of lungs, all out of sync and running into each other. Sado is gasping over him, eyes wide and shocked in the dim light, surging against him even as Kyouraku arches up to meet him. He has always been beautiful, but now he is something otherworldly, too beautiful to be real."

If you say once more that this is a "ridiculous flowery metaphor", I'll begin to spam your reviews with even less sensate comments that I've left up to this very moment.
Oh.

I don't know exactly what to say beyond that. Oh, gorsh. It's beautiful. I've to say, that seems to me an even more unlikely pair than Lavi and Mirand, but they're weirdly nice together. xD Very weirdly nice.

Wow.

WOW.

This story was beautiful. I loved the passing of time and the uncertainty in their strange relationship. Thank you for writing such a lovely story for such a strange pairing. I really did like it.

Before I even started reading the story, I just had to find the fan art of it and by doing so, I stumbled across your livejournal and read it there. I'm being nice and reviewing here anyway.

Thanks again for the beautiful read.

Love

PND

Sweet. :D

This was the best story i have ever read for this pairing; a pairing that didn't make much sense to me until i read this.

This was just lovely, thank you for a beautiful read :) 3

This was incredibly beautiful-exquisite even. I love how you build to the end, to their coming together at last...twenty years, and all that longing between the both of them...yes. Just...yes.

*g*

This fic has moved me greatly, and I have to say, it's been a long time since fic about my non-OTP (Kensei/Shuuhei) has done so.

Thank you for taking the time to write something so incredible.

Ah...new frontiers ~ I know exactly what you mean.

Anyhow, I'm quite glade to see that SOMEONE wrote for this story. Though I will have to look for this other - albeit short - story that you mentioned.

It was wonderfully written, your style is nice and clear and I didn't notice any glaring grammar issues - not that I was really looking.

Usually I don't favorite oneshots...And it takes a lot for me to favorite a long, chapter story. But this was excellent and this pairing is going on my favorite list.

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Wow, I've never looked up this pairing before because I'm always worried that nobody would be able to write it well and I didn't want a terrible story to ruin this pairing for me.

You wrote a wonderful story, it's absolutely perfect and it fits them.

This was beautiful. I think I know what art you are talking about. I remember seeing it a long time ago. Please write more!

Also, if possible, could you send me a link to the website where you found the fanart.

Wow, this was really good! I've never read a fic for Kyoraku/Chad before, and let me say that this one has set the bar really high for any others! Great work!

omg... !

That was... that was...

arg, beautiful, wonderful, all of that !

I want more !

Fantastic story. Wonderful characterisation. Beautiful imagery.

But now I'm very sad because I know there won't be other stories like this around.

I think you need to write more about them :)