Loved it~But you do know they weren't decommissioned right? They were one of the few sector that got to go undercover. :D

Waaaaah! Sadness! I loathe when they get decommisioned! Super sad! But also really good!

Hey,um...do you mind if I draw a fan art of this story? I really liked it.

Excellently written.

Oh, and that cracking sound you just heard, that was my HEART! -Hugs Numbah four- I'M SO SORRY!

Max- Waaaaaaaaaah! you made me cry

(cheering in the background from flock)

Max- not an easy task (all smiles)

so sweet and sad. contue plese.

The short, abrupt sentences are perfect. They're just what the story needs to give the feeling you want the readers to have, to show what's going through Wally's head. I like how you repeated that Wally liked the color green, too. Once again, it let us know what was going on in his mind.

Hehheheheheheheeh! :D I Adore being the reason for such an amazing chapter :D

This was briliant! Ooh you should do a halfie of their wonderous life together and then kuki being decomissioned :O

Yus!

Loved it! 3

aww this is sad :(

it must be hard going through decomissioning...sorry i just had a random thought about that now

hope wally find out that she is an important part of his life soon

you really could continue this based on the storyline you have got going here

well done and just incase you don't write and put up any fics before christmas i will wish you a merry christmas :D

Angst, denial. Nice new angle. Ergh, I'm in love with this. My own stuff makes me sad.

Write soon! 3

Whoa, that was deeper than the Grand Canyon. I love this kind of angsty stuff. Makes me all like, "OOH..."

this is so sad

esspecially the decommisioning part

brilliant so well done

This is really pathetic actually but I'm crying right now ( it's so, so, sad! (

Dare ya to add more? :P it's worth a shot

this was absolutely amazing, really tugged on my heartstrings - especially the part about decommissioning /3 wonderful. just... wow. andra, you ARE brill 3

2AM makes amazing things happen.

I really freakin' loved this.

Every word say a lot - has depth.

I would write more but, I don't think I could find the right words.

You are so brilliant and ultra super-duper amazing fantastic!