Reviews for Expendable |
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![]() ![]() wow satanic much? I can't even form proper words because it all hurts so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rough. Way to hit me with the feels before bed. This might be the most depressing viewpoint on the best ninja team in existence, but accurate in the way you stick with that viewpoint. It's pretty true that they care most about each other, anyone outside this fantastic four is just that. Outside. Rivals, estranged family, unknown familial situations(that are likely unremarkable and havent had much positive impact in those kids lives anyway) would certainly notice and most likely feel some non lingering sadness. Team Gai is 3. Excellent writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Extremely sad and beautiful. I almost cried when they all died, one by one and it was just so sad! This deserves more reviews, favorites and whatever |
![]() ![]() ![]() sigh... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dark and disturbingly true. |
![]() ![]() ![]() D: ... ... How does this not have more reviews? T_T |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow the summary itself hurts. it's a great, albeit heartbreaking, oneshot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The fact that this is probably the truth makes it even worse. I love team Gai, they are probably the most mixed up group around but they truly are one of the best. I love the way you made Neji die though. His final moments seeing his team members die and not even try to avoid the weapons that come to him; because lets face it, Neji could have avoided them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so said and so moving |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh! this is so sad! I now look at team guy in a whole different way! I always thought of them as sort of funny( Guy and Lee mostly) but now...I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY! You've got me sobbing...but team Guy is not expendable! They're irreplacable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() But...but...I care! *teary eyed* I care if they don't come back. *sniff* They're so not a ripple, they're a giant wave! A wave I tell you, a wave! lol. As if the above statements didn't clue you in, I love team Gai. I also loved the story (even if I disagree with team Gai being nothing). It was so sad and sweet I had to review. *grins and gives thumbs up* Good job and keep up the great work! Go team Gai, we loooove you! ~Tamuril2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully tragic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It felt so...real. The cold, bitter truth right there. The idea that they're sent on missions where they can die without people caring, it fits together like a puzzle. Those four...they really don't have someone to fill in the empty blanks besides themselves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow is a good word to describe this story. Short, sad, yet very... wow. xD I really enjoyed reading it because it flowed and I loved your use of words. Great job C: |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that was so sad, i dont get how you made me cry though... |