Reviews for Expendable |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/30 wow satanic much? I can't even form proper words because it all hurts so much |
2019yxzss chapter 1 . 3/25 Rough. Way to hit me with the feels before bed. This might be the most depressing viewpoint on the best ninja team in existence, but accurate in the way you stick with that viewpoint. It's pretty true that they care most about each other, anyone outside this fantastic four is just that. Outside. Rivals, estranged family, unknown familial situations(that are likely unremarkable and havent had much positive impact in those kids lives anyway) would certainly notice and most likely feel some non lingering sadness. Team Gai is 3. Excellent writing! |
Jo-nne-4 chapter 1 . 3/25/2018 Extremely sad and beautiful. I almost cried when they all died, one by one and it was just so sad! This deserves more reviews, favorites and whatever |
Yami no Kero-chan chapter 1 . 12/10/2012 sigh... |
Taryn Myst chapter 1 . 9/29/2012 Dark and disturbingly true. |
Gshaygahajsyava chapter 1 . 9/10/2012 D: ... ... How does this not have more reviews? T_T |
leiaah chapter 1 . 8/13/2012 wow the summary itself hurts. it's a great, albeit heartbreaking, oneshot. |
Azurii chapter 1 . 4/14/2012 The fact that this is probably the truth makes it even worse. I love team Gai, they are probably the most mixed up group around but they truly are one of the best. I love the way you made Neji die though. His final moments seeing his team members die and not even try to avoid the weapons that come to him; because lets face it, Neji could have avoided them. |
Crazycally chapter 1 . 1/29/2012 That was so said and so moving |
baozito3 chapter 1 . 11/10/2011 oh my gosh! this is so sad! I now look at team guy in a whole different way! I always thought of them as sort of funny( Guy and Lee mostly) but now...I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY! You've got me sobbing...but team Guy is not expendable! They're irreplacable! |
Tamuril2 chapter 1 . 1/18/2011 But...but...I care! *teary eyed* I care if they don't come back. *sniff* They're so not a ripple, they're a giant wave! A wave I tell you, a wave! lol. As if the above statements didn't clue you in, I love team Gai. I also loved the story (even if I disagree with team Gai being nothing). It was so sad and sweet I had to review. *grins and gives thumbs up* Good job and keep up the great work! Go team Gai, we loooove you! ~Tamuril2 |
Nukumi chapter 1 . 12/18/2010 Beautifully tragic. |
the sky's bouquet chapter 1 . 8/26/2010 It felt so...real. The cold, bitter truth right there. The idea that they're sent on missions where they can die without people caring, it fits together like a puzzle. Those four...they really don't have someone to fill in the empty blanks besides themselves. |
ArtemisWest chapter 1 . 7/23/2010 Wow is a good word to describe this story. Short, sad, yet very... wow. xD I really enjoyed reading it because it flowed and I loved your use of words. Great job C: |
Tabs14 chapter 1 . 1/15/2010 aw that was so sad, i dont get how you made me cry though... |