that was a New idea and I really wanna see more of it. This universe I mean

Good stories all around. But this chapter my absolute favorite!

Cute very cute :3

I luv this chapter(chap7)the most:)

This...AAARRRGGHHHHHHHHH the angst... but I love it. Quite a perspective teaser, huh? Guess that's why you named it what you did.

*reads the Darkness section* Primus almighty! That's exactly what I do! I'm that very same way! Only up until recently, I had to bear the pain alone. At least last Tuesday, when I went through it, my brother was with me.

Awwww, this were two very sweet and funny chapters. To be honest, I have to admit I really though Prowl would win the dance competition. XD But I guess he already showed the twins by proving he was not exactly a lost cause as they might have expected.

The second story was also great. I do love those stories that look behind the scenes and show that Prowl and Jazz are more than what other mecha know about them. It was a bit sad of course, especially with the bad mood and the loss against the Decepticons. And humans are stupid sometimes, really. They should be grateful that they at least HAVE the Autobots to protect them. That doesn't mean they can be everywhere and things like that happen. If the humans are not happy, they could always start to look after themselves and leave the poor Autobots alone. That one was a really sad but realistic point of view into typical human behaviour.

Well, as I've said, great writing. I am glad I finally got some time to read a bit Transformers again. Nowadays I am fully lost into Sherlock for now, I have to admit. But I am just SO in love with the BBC series. They are simply great. *coughs* Okay... *coughs* I am ranting here, sorry.
But all left I can say is that I am looking forward to the next chapter of your little beauty here. :)

Sincerely

Atemue /_\

Strong Prowl is always awesome. Lovely ficlet

hahah looool sneaky Prowl is sneaky. Bet he just wanted to get Jazz interested )

Why would you do that to me?! Poor Jazz!

This is what makes them truly perfect for each other - they know their weaknesses, accept them and support them all at the same time. Prowl is not threatened when Jazz falls apart, and Prowl knows Jazz needs to have a safe place to get his feelings out from behind the mask Jazz has to wear 99% of the time. Prowl works crazy hard himself, and only Jazz and his overflowing compassion would be enough to dig in and make sure Prowl took care of himself and take time to find the brightly burning spark who loves his fellow bots and who is so affected by each and everyone lost to the war but can't seem to show it to others. They each wear masks much of the time, and they both need each other for the safety to just be who they really are and be at peace for a bit of sleep.

Prowl wins for the best line - As Jazz points out, it sounds very Prime like...and then Prowl says he's simply right...ya, that too )

It has to be hard sometimes, they try so hard and it's not enough. Ether for the humans or for themselves. It sounds like their day truly sucked. : /

Heh. Honestly with the way fics like this usually go I /was/ expecting Jazz and Prowl to win. - Was cute though and I just picture Jazz all pouty he didn't win and then perking up when Prowl says what he does.

Awww, Prowler, what you do for the good of the mechs you work with ) I esp loved the part where he was working out the details of the prizes...Last line is the best ) I think he planned the whole thing just for that, sneaky mech!

Aww, that was cute! (And, because I read the other chapter before this one, I'll review here for two. :) ) 'Strength' was amazing, so sad. Good thing Prowl's there to support him. (And dance the cares away?)