Reviews for The Move |
---|
grimmich chapter 2 . 1/3/2017 She could always change the locks then she doesnt need fhe key back ... |
IAmCayj chapter 8 . 6/11/2016 280 a week? hahahaha That couldn't even buy groceries. Or pay for the gas I'm both their cars plus all the eating out they do. household supplies, etc. Then bills alone would destroy them. $12/hr is a lot more than 280 per week also unless he's not working many hours but you said he works 7-7 on weekends and that's 12 hours saturday alone without even adding the hours from the weekdays. Just saying, your math is in serious need of an editing session. While I'm reviewing I'll just say love seen a lot of things that contradict each other and more grammar and spelling errors than that. But I wont name each one and just say you should get a beta reader |
IAmCayj chapter 1 . 6/11/2016 Who is Sanjay? Do you mean Margaret's husband Shaker? |
sophiamommy chapter 10 . 11/10/2014 I wish the series went like this I couldn't even watch the last season good job |
sfbxfcb chapter 10 . 6/24/2011 Wonderful! |
Tembalina chapter 10 . 8/13/2010 wow, LOVE THIS STORY, put up the sequel im sure it will be amazing. |
SeaJay28 chapter 10 . 3/5/2010 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update or post a sequel... I want to read more! |
EF-5 Disaster chapter 10 . 2/25/2010 put that sequel up, i wanna read more |
miley-o123 chapter 10 . 2/23/2010 sweet. can't wait! |
LivelifexxDreambig123 chapter 10 . 2/22/2010 Great! I can't wait |
FatCake chapter 9 . 2/21/2010 I love it(: |
meghan.x chapter 1 . 2/20/2010 I love this story. |
Hannah chapter 9 . 2/18/2010 Alyssa, I ship Amy and Ricky. But Ricky is out of character in this story. But it's fanfiction, so it doesn't really matter. I still like her story. |
Never. Shout. Valeria chapter 9 . 2/7/2010 Luv this story one of the best stories ever |
eddymyla chapter 9 . 2/7/2010 story is pretty good. is it really done? |