Holy fuck, wholesomeness overload, you got me to feel emotion(s?) like never before, I thank you. Kind Sir/Ma’am

Hm. HHhhmmmmmmm...
Definitely worth it.
Interesting style.
Could have made use of more of its potential, but it doesn't have to.
It's... good. Yea. Very nice character interactions.

Quality shit

and the i see the authors note at the beginning of the chapter, so i go back a chapter and what do you know a warning about slash... sorry i skip those. If the warning was in the summary i would have seen it. Still an amazing story and this chapter was fun.

I know its very much low key, but a warning about slash content would have been nice.. Otherwise amazing story. I'm pretty sure i read it many years ago, but its been long enough that it feels fresh. Thank You for writing and sharing this!

Okay, so is the Japanese word for genius literally the same as natural disaster? Because that would be amazing. (I understand that words can be different in Japanese with the same basic sounds. I'm just asking if it is literally the same, pitch and all.)

Fricken great story! Absolutely loved it!

sasuke did not slept or kill karin in canon unless this is your context in your stores if so tell me

the only problem, why are they talming like that?

umm..? what..?

Hi! First thing, I love your story. Secondly, would you ever do an epilogue? There are so many things still up in the air, and the scroll with the unranked mission seems more like something the three little geniuses would come up than an actuall scroll, wouldn't It?
I'll skeem some of your other Naruto Fan Fic, i really like your writing style :)

Hey! I love Team Tensai and the rest of this 'verse so much! It's just a really adorable story with cute creepy children and found family and all that good shit. I know you've got some of your fic on AO3, but have you put any thought into adding Team Tensai to it? I would really appreciate it if you did! There are like, twenty fic that I come back to FFN to read on the reg and this is one of them, and if it was over on AO3 it would be much easier to sit down and read in one giant lump XD. Anyway, like I said I love this fic and I also hope you're having a good day!

I think this needs a denouement, but that's just me.

There is no light without dark.

Sadness and Sorrow, and a grounded reality enhance the bright and humorous parts.

Most time travel fics (fix XD) might be satisfying or interesting, but focus too much on "how would this particular situation change" rather than focusing on relationships (not necessarily shipping) between existing characters. Or the full reality of the situation that might not be obvious in the canon show, and might just be hinted at.

I haven't even seen enough of this story to tell if I'll like the main plot, but I can definitely say that the base QUALITY of the writing is better than mine. Actually, better than many published authors.