Whole book is excellent. Please restart!

Harry SO wouldn't say that

The last time you updated this was nine years ago, so it's probably a lost cause, but PLEASE UPDATE THIS! I liked it. :)

So if you flame one of my fics, watch out!

"Way to much dialogue compared to none dialogue"? No fucking duh.

"Show, not tell"? Actually no, I haven't heard of it. I always thought it was 'Show AND tell' and I thought that's what you were suppose to do with stories 'show and tell' not just 'show'.

"Stupid self inserted original character"? Um...yeah, she is kind of stupid. 'Self inserted'? Um yeah! I DID insert her into the story...and I thought she was pretty original too...and I guess you agree...

Don't talk to me about 'not funny' and 'all of it was dumb'. Have you not LOOKED at YOUR story? Please, it's the same idea just different characters! You lines are stupid too.

A lot of your spelling is wrong, and is this an AU? Because in Harry's fifth year, Percy was pretty much disowned by the family if you haven't noticed.

And what does being in high school have to do with writing stories? Just because I'm in it doesn't mean that I can write better than someone who's not.

Whatever, this was a waste of my time.

I really don't know why you enjoy flaming stories, it's a waste of your time and the writers time. Why read the story if you don't enjoy it? And why put down someone else that maybe happens to enjoy it? I'm only doing this because I know you won't be back to read what I say on the next chapter of my story (unless you're just an idiot and continue to read my story when you say it sucks).

Oh, and I suggest before you write anymore of your stories or whatever you continue to do, that you take out the large stick jammed up your ass first.

Cheers.

Dude, this story is SO amazingly awesome! I like your brain! _

OHH! Come on, you can't leave it there! I wanna know what happens. Please write more soon...

This is SOO FUNNY!

Percy is getting what he deserves, but poor Fred, um, or is it George? Oh well!

Update SOON!

BTW, could you please read my fic?

Fred and Percy switching bodys? Why didn't I think of that! It's bloody brilliant, not to mention funny!

WRITE MORE SOON! My poor twin brother! Percy's just not the same since I last saw him. We used to be worse than Fred and George. WRITE MORE!

I think some of the people that have reviewed your story think way too much of themselves... never stop writing. You might want to look over the typos though. Other than that i think its coming along nicely.. oh and you can tell minimurderer that they need to get a life and stop being so childish.

I like this story, but it seems that you haven't updated this story for a while, please update; I'm tired of stories never being updated espicially the ones I have taking a likeing to. UPDATE...please.

Hello thanks ever so not for the annoying review. OK, first Fred and PERCY! Come on what other moronic things could you do? And in your author's note you used the wrong RIGHT it is R-I-G-H-T not write as in write something down then read it later. And Harry may not be that hyper but just wait until later chapters and you may see WHY! Sirius came and he told Harry he will be going on trial he gets a TRIAL!And besides Ron isn't that stupid. Do you HAVE an older brother because I have THREE! Believe me we don't do jack for each other. Next time you decide to leave a review and it has NO CONSTRUCTIVE critisism at ALL then remember don't be duissing my stories because I SO believe in revenge and the SWEET SWEET taste of PAYBACK!

No! You can't leave us there! AHH! I gotta know what you're cooking up next! I love this story it's great! Keep it up!

Ooh, I love this! You're doing wonderfully :3 I especially love how Sirius is getting involved :D *loves on sirius* If you could...would you email me the next time you add a chapter? Just the next one...it's ok if you can't though -

Look, we don't need to know everything about Harry Potter, very very poor writing. You need to get a good hobby. Like knitting. You'd be better at ANYTHING more than this. Horrible 1st person POV. You make Fred sound like a zombie. Percy is even more annoying. Oddly confusing and not a good plot. WAY too many stories like this out there, so unless you try to write it well, then do us all a favor and don't try and write it at ALL.

"KYEEE!"