I love how sweet and tender this was.

Beautiful 3

I can completely see this being how Yuffie and Vincent get together, falling & fighting their way into a relationship without quite realizing how it happened. It's good for Vincent to feel vulnerable around people who won't take advantage of it...well, not in ways he won't enjoy, anyway

I LOVED how you portrayed their relationship, so awkward and adorable and sweet. I think you did a good job with Vincent's inner dialogue, too. This was a great one shot. n_n

I've never reviewed? How...disappointing of me.

I remember this FanFic clearly because one line always stood out to me. "You're not supposed to say 'I'm sorry' all emo-like..." It's probably the best Yuffie-line I've ever read. Smut isn't good if you focus all your energy on it and twist it into PWP. I'd much rather read a minimal-smut fic with a lot of meaning than a vulgar, explicit and totally meaningless sex scene. (That's just normally porn, people!) In short, this was a really well written one-shot.

Awesomely written.

~A Broken Heroine

The "No Yuffie you're a towel" line made me laugh out loud. I enjoyed this very much.

"You're not supposed to say 'I'm sorry,' all emo-like, Vince. You're supposed to say 'No Yuffie, you're a towel,' and then we have really hot make-up sex." OMFG. That made me laugh so hard. xDD

I like the meaning! Smut is better with meaning in my book. p I love this! Hot, romantic VY sex is like food for my brain. Or something.

But you shouldn't apologize, that's silly! I am in love with this, and the Where We Collide stories. Plus, I need some happiness after reading your angst. :)

I definitely have to agree with the rest of the reviewers that you did a fantastic job. I really enjoyed reading the story through Vincent's point of view which a few authors do. I think that you accomplished something that a lot of people can't do and I really appreciated this story. Thanks a lot! :DDD

P.S. Sorry for the formal use of language.. I get really nerdy when I review a good fic xDDDD

alexzhou04

Great story

i think you did incredibly well. i like it a lot. _

That was great!

I loved it. :P Your snippets of dialogue were really funny, and you write Vincent's POV very well.

I'm pretty sure I noticed one of two grammatical errors, but they looked more like typos than anything. So, my only construct. crit. would be to read for typos a tad more.

Awesome!

You had me worried through out the story cause everything was spoken in the past tense and I though that Yuffie had died!

But to my relief she lives!

At least I think!

But the angst/drama in that would have be also good!

Anyways amazing story!

well...that was steamy. very well written.