Reviews for The Final Rallying Point
maj1997 chapter 3 . 7/14
I really loved this story when I’ve read it for the first time some years ago. This did not change through the time and I am still checking it every month for an update. Do you plan to continue it? Wish you luck and lots of inspiration!
hesper chapter 3 . 6/22/2018
omg you are A genius!best spr fiction i've ever seen!pleeeeeaaaaase updateI really hope to see Ricky meeting his country boy again. ps. Reiben and Jackson were my favourite characters.
romanov16 chapter 3 . 6/6/2017
Oh dear Lord. I've always loved WW2 stories. And this is beautiful. You know, if you change some of he names and concepts, this would be a amazing book. its that good. I love the bit about the camps, and how even just by holding the dying boy, Reiben heals him...probably by showing the kid that the world isn't fozen by the hate that ended his life.
And the mention of the towers...that was lovely.
TemplNut chapter 3 . 2/2/2017
Oh I'm so happy that you decided to continue this story, I love it and I hope you will finish it one day. The new chapter is really good, it was very interesting to read. I wish you a lot of inspiration and desire to write more of it.
Pinkellie2002 chapter 3 . 8/26/2016
Oh my gosh I love it!
Pinkellie2002 chapter 2 . 8/4/2016
Omg PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!
Rhianna 1704 chapter 2 . 5/5/2016
Please continue writing this
Please add my favorite character (aka captain miller)
Loving this stor chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!
NaiveLove chapter 2 . 5/7/2013
This is amazing! Why haven't you updated? I'm so disappointed, I'd really love to see what happens next! :)
Dragonfly999 chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
This is absolutely beautiful. I hope Reiben meets Jackson after Wade - he needs to reunite with the Bumpkin!
Mikey chapter 2 . 2/13/2011
I love your story! It was so inspiring. Will you continue it? There's still 3 more people left! Well, that's Wade, for one. Please continue! Looking forward to it! Great Story!
Seraphina Herondale chapter 2 . 12/4/2010
I'm desperate to see mellish and upham's convo :)
Sarah chapter 2 . 6/15/2010
Wow. Wow! This story is simply amazing. You do such a wonderful job writing it, and your ideas are absolutely perfect. Words can't do it justice, and I'm finding it hard to say what I need to about this story. :) Just know it's amazing and I am looking forward to more.

Also, Wade's line gave me shivers: "You know, the trick to falling asleep, Reiben, is to try to stay awake."

Oh man. Just absolutely beautiful.
writingangel13 chapter 2 . 5/31/2010
I love this story! Im really excited about hearing what Wade has to say to him! Please update soooooon!

~Becca
Electric Candlelight chapter 2 . 4/8/2010
That was an awesome chapter. And I can't wait for Wade's lesson, now. XP
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