OH gawsh you should continue this one. i am DYing to know what happens, cuz this edward, its impossible to know what he's thinking.

OMG you have to make this chapter ninto a story, i love it! My fave chapter of your whole one-shot thing im reading. They're all brill don't get me wrong, but this is m fave, btw it's chap 7.

Aphrodite x

Really good one..

So now he understands...

I gotta chuckle a bit here, even if you didn't intend on this being funny it kinda was for me.

This makes me question again, How is it he didn't break her in two in the books?

That's fiction for ya...

Have you though about extending this into a story?

I'm laughing here. Not sure if that was suppose to be funny, but I got a chuckle from it LOL

~Susan

I just laughed out loud. Really really hard. Not only was this written really well, it managed to induce three minutes of laughter in me. I loved it. I'm excited to see more.

I love you. :]

Elodie~

I wouldn't mind seeing this go somewhere...really nice.

Nice...

I don't really understand chapter five? Could you clarify?

Enjoyed it. I love reading EPOV.

Thanks for the update!

wow that was amazing you're really talented!

This was wonderful. I could just see him thinking this while he watched her burn.

erica

cool to see how Edward's mind would've been like on how he killed Victoria...I almost like it as much as Bella's POV